Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 流暢さと発音を向上させ、無意味なフィラー（uh, um）を減らすこと。文を簡潔にし、理由を明確に述べること。例として「typing is faster」「it reduces mistakes」のように具体的な比較語句を使い、文法を整えて現在形で話すと自然です。

例: I prefer typing because I use a computer in all my college classes. Typing is faster than handwriting and helps reduce mistakes, so it's more efficient for taking notes.

提案: 言い換えや繰り返しを避け、接続詞を正しく使って理由を伝えること。語彙は“portable”や“convenient”など適切な形容詞を使い、文を一つか二つにまとめて明確に述べましょう。

例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because it's the only device I have. Laptops are more portable and convenient for studying and working on the go.

提案: 時制と語順を正確にし、冗長な繰り返しを避けること。具体的なタイミングと状況（年齢や学年、授業の種類）を一文で述べ、必要なら続けて理由や結果を付け加えましょう。

例: I learned to type when I was in high school during computer classes. We were allowed to use laptops in lessons, so I started practicing regularly.

提案: サイト名や具体的な練習方法を一つか二つ挙げ、文章構成を整理して結論を明確に述べること。接続詞で練習の頻度や効果を説明すると説得力が増します。

例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly on online typing websites, such as Sushida and E-typing. By doing timed exercises every day, my speed and accuracy have improved significantly.

× I prefer typing because uh, I always use computer UH in uh class at class of college.

✓ I prefer typing because I always use a computer in my college classes.

The student should use simple present tense for habitual actions (use -> use), include the article 'a' before 'computer', and correct noun phrases: 'class at class of college' -> 'my college classes'. Also remove filler words. Improve by practicing concise present-tense statements and proper article use.

× I think UH typing is faster than handwriting and uh not make mistake.

✓ I think typing is faster than handwriting and makes fewer mistakes.

When comparing, use the comparative form 'faster than'. For the second clause, use present simple with subject-verb agreement: 'typing ... makes'. Use 'fewer mistakes' for countable errors. Suggest practicing subject-verb agreement and correct use of fewer/more.

× I type on that laptop keyboard every day and because uh, I have only laptop but but however, I think laptop is very uh, MO mobile convenient to.

✓ I type on my laptop keyboard every day because I only have a laptop, and I think laptops are very convenient and mobile.

Use correct possessive pronoun 'my' and simplify redundancy ('but however' is incorrect). Use plural/general 'laptops are' when making a general statement. Place adjectives 'very convenient and mobile' after the noun. Suggest learning possessive pronouns and avoiding redundant conjunctions.

× I learned, I learned how to keep, how to type keyboard, uh, at I'm when I was high school student, uh, in a high school class, uh, I, I allowed to use laptop.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was a high school student in a class where I was allowed to use a laptop.

Use past simple 'learned' correctly and remove repeated fragments. Use correct prepositions: 'type on a keyboard' and 'when I was a high school student'. Use passive 'was allowed to use' for permission in the past. Practice forming past-tense sentences with correct prepositions and passive where needed.

× So I start to use laptop.

✓ So I started to use a laptop.

The action is in the past, so use past simple 'started' instead of 'start'. Include the article 'a' before 'laptop'. Suggest reviewing regular past-tense verb forms and articles.

× I improve my typing by practicing and typing on website practice website for web practicing for example Sushida or E typing site I so I can improve very well.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing on websites for typing practice, for example Sushida or E-typing, so I can improve a lot.

Use gerunds after 'by' ('by practicing'). Correct noun phrases: 'websites for typing practice'. Remove repetition and add connectors. Use 'a lot' instead of 'very well' for improvement degree. Practice using gerunds and clear noun phrases.