Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, avoid fillers (“uh”) and finish the sentence. Add one specific reason with a linking word. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer handwriting to typing. Although I type a lot for my job as an office administrator, handwriting feels more comfortable and less tiring for my fingers.

提案: Clarify and correct the comparison: say whether you use a desktop or laptop, explain why using one is better, and use linking words for coherence. Avoid minor grammar errors and redundancy.

例: I usually type on a desktop keyboard because it allows me to adjust the height and position for better comfort, which helps reduce wrist strain during long workdays.

提案: Give a direct time reference and complete the explanation. Remove fillers and finish your sentence. Use linking words to connect school use and entertainment reasons with specific details.

例: I learned to type during my primary school years when computers were introduced in class. I practiced both for school assignments and for playing computer games, which helped me improve quickly.

提案: Give a concise, specific method and include an example of a practice routine or tool. Avoid clichés and filler words; use linking words to show cause and effect.

例: I improve my typing by practising daily with online typing tests for 15–20 minutes, which increases both speed and accuracy. For example, I use a typing website that tracks my progress and highlights keys I often mistype.

× I personally prefer handwriting, though I have to type a lot as uh because of my work uh, as I'm working as an office administrator, so I think it hurts finger and sometimes handwriting is quite.

✓ I personally prefer handwriting, though I have to type a lot because of my work, as I work as an office administrator. I think it hurts my fingers, and sometimes my handwriting is poor.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and possessive forms ('hurts finger' should be 'hurts my fingers', 'handwriting is quite' is incomplete and needs a complement). Also reduce redundancy ('as I'm working' -> 'as I work'). Use consistent pronouns and complete descriptions. Suggestion: use possessive pronouns for body parts and finish comparative phrases. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× Well, I do work on a computer, so I have to type on a keyboard rather than laptop so I can easily adjust the size and the place of my keyboard wherever I want.

✓ Well, I do work on a computer, so I have to type on a keyboard rather than on a laptop, and I can easily adjust the size and position of my keyboard wherever I want.

Missing preposition 'on' before 'laptop' and 'place' is better expressed as 'position'. Also connect clauses with 'and' for clarity. Use correct prepositions with devices: 'type on a laptop'. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× I think I've learnt it, uh, during my school days because at that time I used computer for academic purpose as well As for the entertainment because I love to play games and.

✓ I think I learnt it during my school days because at that time I used a computer for academic purposes and for entertainment, because I loved to play games.

Use simple past for completed actions in the past ('learnt' or 'learned' is fine; keep consistent tense). Add article 'a' before 'computer' and plural 'purposes'. 'Love' should be past 'loved' to match 'used' timeframe. Remove sentence fragment at the end by completing the idea. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× I think practice makes a man perfect, so by typing a lot, 1 can improve the typing speed and the accuracy.

✓ I think practice makes a person perfect, so by typing a lot, one can improve typing speed and accuracy.

Use gender-neutral 'person' instead of 'man' and pronoun 'one' consistent with 'a person'. Remove the article 'the' before uncountable nouns 'typing speed' and 'accuracy'. Also correct digit '1' to word 'one'. Grammar problem type ID: 27

× And I think by using the keyboard a number of times, a person can well aware of the keys where they are, uh, located.

✓ And I think by using the keyboard many times, a person can become well aware of where the keys are located.

Incorrect adjective/adverb placement and missing verb 'become' after 'can'. Use 'many times' instead of 'a number of times' for naturalness, and move 'where the keys are located' to correct order. 'Well aware' needs linking verb: 'become well aware'. Grammar problem type ID: 13