Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 减少口头禅与重复，句子更简洁；注意词汇搭配（例如 “more fast” 应为 “faster”），并用一到两句具体原因支持偏好，保持自然流畅。

例: It depends on the task. For assignments and reports I prefer typing because it’s faster and easier to edit, while for greeting cards I like handwriting because it feels more personal and thoughtful.

提案: 减少犹豫词并理清表述顺序；使用正确词汇（例如 “desktop keyboard” 而不是 “desk desktop key”），简洁说明设备和使用习惯。

例: I usually use a laptop with an external monitor and keyboard. I connect my laptop to the monitor and type on the external keyboard because it’s more comfortable for long work sessions.

提案: 避免冗长重复，直接给出时间点并补充一两条具体细节（例如学到的内容或练习方式），使回答更具体。

例: I learned to type in elementary school during our computer classes. We practiced basic skills like using the keyboard, typing common words and simple exercises to build speed.

提案: 避免重复表达，提供更具体的方法和例子（例如使用打字练习网站、定时练习或专注于准确性练习），并用链接词组织句子。

例: I improve my typing by practising regularly using online typing exercises and timed tests. For example, I do 20-minute drills three times a week and focus first on accuracy, then gradually increase speed.

× I would prefer, uh, typing because it's more fast, it is faster and more convenient.

✓ I would prefer typing because it's faster and more convenient.

原句中使用了“more fast”，这是冗余且不符合英语比较级规则。单音节或某些双音节形容词（如 fast）直接加 -er 构成比较级，不能再用 more。建议记住常见形容词的比较级形式（fast → faster，more useful 等），避免同时使用 more 和 -er。

× However, if you're talking about ascending a gift card or a birthday card, then I would prefer handwriting.

✓ However, if you're talking about sending a gift card or a birthday card, then I would prefer handwriting.

原句中使用了单词“ascending”，该词与“寄送/发送”无关，造成语义错误。正确表述应为“send”或“sending”。建议加强常用动词搭配记忆，遇到不确定词汇时查词典。

× Well, I, I, umm, usually type on desk desktop key, but to be more specifically, actually I only have a laptop, but I also, uh, have uh, so I bought a extra, an external keyboard and a monitor.

✓ Well, I usually type on a desktop keyboard, but to be more specific, I only have a laptop, so I bought an external keyboard and a monitor.

原句存在词序混乱、重复填充词（um, uh）以及不正确的名词搭配（desk desktop key）。需要把短语整理为“desktop keyboard”，并用连词和逗号合理连接句子，避免冗余词汇。建议写作或口语时先组织好句子骨架（主语+谓语+宾语），再补充细节，减少填充词。

× So basically I connect my PC to the monitors and type on the keyboard.

✓ So basically I connect my PC to the monitor and type on the keyboard.

根据前文“a monitor”是单数，后句应保持一致使用单数“monitor”。另外“connect ... to the monitors”会引起指代不明。建议核对句子中单复数一致性，明确指代对象。

× Well, I cannot quite remember because it is quite a long time, maybe in my elementary school, I would say because back then we have, we, we have a class called computer class.

✓ Well, I cannot quite remember because it was quite a long time ago, maybe in my elementary school. Back then we had a class called computer class.

叙述过去的经历应使用过去时。原句中混用了现在时（is, have），不符合时态一致性。应把描述过去的状况改为过去时（was, had）。建议在讲述过去事件时统一使用过去时态。

× And that, that the class was, uh, mainly for learning some computer skills.

✓ That class was mainly for learning some computer skills.

原句中多余的指示词和填充词导致冗长，“the class”与前文重复且“that, that”多余。简化为“That class was mainly for learning some computer skills.” 更清晰。建议删除不必要的重复和填充词，使句子更简洁。

× Well, I think the only way you can improve your typing is by frequently practicing.

✓ Well, I think the only way to improve your typing is by practicing frequently.

原句中“you can improve”虽可理解，但与“the only way”结构搭配更自然的表达是不带人称的“to improve”。同时“frequently practicing”更自然的词序是“practicing frequently”。建议掌握不定式结构在说明方法时的用法（the way to do sth）。

× And uh, if you type, if you type a lot and then you'll, you'll gradually find yourself typing faster and faster, and the accuracy and misspelling will reduce definitely if you practice a lot of times.

✓ If you type a lot, you'll gradually find yourself typing faster and faster, and your accuracy and number of misspellings will definitely decrease if you practice often.

原句存在词类和搭配问题：“the accuracy and misspelling”搭配不当，应为“accuracy and number of misspellings”；“will reduce”被动不自然，通常说“decrease”；“a lot of times”口语可用“often”。建议注意名词搭配（accuracy 与 mistakes/misspellings），以及“decrease”用于数量或错误的减少。