Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly in the first sentence by stating your preference. Then explain that a window seat lets you enjoy the scenery or identify places during the journey. Improve grammar by using “when travelling,” “you can look at,” and “I enjoy sitting by the window.” Avoid repeating “I think” and “really good,” and provide one specific detail to make the answer more natural and effective.

例: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when travelling because I can enjoy the scenery along the way. For example, I like looking at the countryside and spotting interesting buildings in unfamiliar places. It also makes long journeys more enjoyable for me.

提案: Give a clear answer about the journey and name the destination or type of trip accurately. Use the past tense consistently because the question asks about childhood: say “I liked,” “we could spend,” and “we had.” Correct “make a new friends” to “make new friends,” and replace the unclear phrase “it was a Tuka” with a specific description. Add one or two connected details about the food, activities, or family time, and avoid unrelated comments such as “it’s important nowadays.”

例: Yes, when I was about ten, my family and I took a long journey to the countryside. The trip lasted nearly six hours, but I enjoyed it because we talked, played games, and ate delicious local food together. Although it was tiring, it was a memorable family experience.

× Yes, I think it's really important in your trip because you can looking for your building or maybe looking for a different place in this country, I think it's really good sitting, yes.

✓ Yes, I think it's really important on your trip because you can look for your building or maybe look for a different place in this country. I think it's really good to sit by the window.

The natural preposition used with trip is on, not in. We say on a trip when referring to an activity or experience during travel.

× Yes, I think it's really important in your trip because you can looking for your building or maybe looking for a different place in this country, I think it's really good sitting, yes.

✓ Yes, I think it's really important on your trip because you can look for your building or maybe look for a different place in this country. I think it's really good to sit by the window.

A modal verb such as can must be followed by the base form of a verb, not the -ing form. Therefore, can looking should be can look. The second verb should also be look to maintain parallel structure.

× Yes, I think it's really important in your trip because you can looking for your building or maybe looking for a different place in this country, I think it's really good sitting, yes.

✓ Yes, I think it's really important on your trip because you can look for your building or maybe look for a different place in this country. I think it's really good to sit by the window.

After the adjective phrase good, the infinitive to sit is more appropriate when explaining that an activity is beneficial or enjoyable. Good sitting is not natural in this context.

× Yes, I think it's really important in your trip because you can looking for your building or maybe looking for a different place in this country, I think it's really good sitting, yes.

✓ Yes, I think it's really important on your trip because you can look for your building or maybe look for a different place in this country. I think it's really good to sit by the window.

The original sentence joins several complete ideas with commas, creating a run-on sentence. Separate the ideas with a full stop and use a clear concluding sentence.

× I really like this country because I can make a new friends or maybe spend time with my family.

✓ I really liked this country because I could make new friends or maybe spend time with my family.

The question asks about a journey during your childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Like changes to liked, and can changes to could to describe past ability or possibility.

× I really like this country because I can make a new friends or maybe spend time with my family.

✓ I really liked this country because I could make new friends or maybe spend time with my family.

Friends is plural, so it cannot be used with the singular article a. Use new friends for more than one friend, or use a new friend for one friend.

× I really like this country because I can make a new friends or maybe spend time with my family.

✓ I really liked this country because I could make new friends or maybe spend time with my family.

The article a is used only with a singular countable noun. Since friends is plural, remove a and say make new friends.

× It was really great because we have we had a tasty food

✓ It was really great because we had tasty food.

The sentence describes a past journey, so have should be in the past tense, had. The repeated phrase we have we had should also be reduced to the correct form, we had.

× It was really great because we have we had a tasty food

✓ It was really great because we had tasty food.

Food is usually an uncountable noun when referring to food in general, so it does not take the indefinite article a. Say tasty food, not a tasty food.