Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，理由和例子也比较具体，符合“观点+细节”的结构。不过，第一句中“when I travel”后面缺少标点；“sitting beside the window”和“sitting next to the window”重复出现，可以适当替换。最后一句以“And”开头略显不自然，而且没有补充新的信息。建议使用“because”或“so”连接原因，并加入一个更具体的感受，例如欣赏风景或避免与陌生人交谈。

例: Yes, I definitely prefer a window seat when I travel because I enjoy looking at the scenery outside. On a bullet train, I can watch green mountains and rivers go by, while on a plane, I can admire the clouds and take a few photos. It also gives me a little more privacy during the journey.

提案: 回答包含了直接回答、旅行地点和记忆中的景点，但主要问题是时态错误：“I travel”应改为“I travelled”或“I travelled with my family to Bangkok”。“the golden Buddhist”表达不完整，应该说“a golden Buddha statue”或“the golden Buddha statues in the temples”。此外，答案只有一个较长的句子，建议用连接词拆分并补充一项具体经历或感受，例如旅程很长的原因、当时的兴奋心情，或家人一起做了什么。

例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, my family and I took a long trip to Bangkok, which took several hours by plane. I still remember visiting the Grand Palace and seeing the beautiful golden Buddha statues in the temples. It was unforgettable because it was my first trip abroad with my family.

× Yes, when I was a child, I travel with my family to Bangkok and I can still remember the Grand Palace and the golden Buddhist in the temple.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I traveled with my family to Bangkok, and I can still remember the Grand Palace and the golden Buddhist in the temple.

“When I was a child”表示过去的时间，因此后面的“travel”也应该使用一般过去时“traveled”。另外，在并列分句之间加逗号可以使句子结构更清晰。建议看到“when I was...”等明确的过去时间表达时，检查主句中的动词是否使用过去式。