Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer has a clear direct response and relevant supporting details. However, “fairly press it” is unclear and unnatural; you may mean “helps me feel peaceful” or “helps me forget my worries.” Also, “watching changes in the weather or light” could be expressed more naturally as “watching the weather and light change.” Keep the answer concise and use a linking word such as “Besides” or “Moreover” to connect your second reason.

例: Yes, I definitely prefer sitting by the window when I travel because the scenery helps me relax and forget my worries. Besides, I enjoy taking photos of the landscapes and watching the weather and light change as we move. It makes the journey more enjoyable, especially on a long train ride.

提案: You answer the question directly and include specific details about the destination and food, but several expressions need correction. Say “Jeju Island” if that is the intended place, “tried some local dishes” instead of “tried to look for dishes,” “the trip especially memorable” instead of “the tree especially memorable,” and “tasted” rather than “tested” for food. Add punctuation after “Jeju Island” and use a clear sequence with linking words such as “During the trip” and “As a result.”

例: Yes, when I was a child, I took a long trip with my family to Jeju Island. During the trip, we ate at a famous local restaurant and tried several traditional dishes. It was especially memorable because I had never tasted food like that before.