Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，且给出了原因，但句子过长，连接不够自然。“actually”位置不当，而且“了解其他国家的文化和历史遗产”与坐在窗边的关系比较间接。建议使用清晰的主题句，再补充一个具体、相关的例子，例如欣赏风景、拍照或观察当地生活。

例: Yes, definitely. I prefer sitting by the window because I can enjoy the scenery along the way. For example, when I travel by train, I love looking at the mountains, rivers and small towns outside. It makes the journey much more enjoyable.

提案: 回答包含时间、地点、同行者和经历，内容较具体，但有明显的词汇和时态问题。“remember one quickly”应改为“remember one clearly”，“I feel”应改为过去时“I felt”，“super excited”在考试中可换成更自然的“very excited”。建议增加一个结果或具体活动，使故事更完整。

例: Yes, I did. When I was about eight, my parents took me on a several-hour road trip from Qinhuangdao to a coastal city. I was very excited because it was my first time visiting the seaside, although we were stuck in traffic for a while. In the end, we arrived safely and had a wonderful time on the beach.

× Oh yes, I remember one quickly when I was about eight.

✓ Oh yes, I remember one clearly when I was about eight.

“Quickly”表示“快速地”，不能准确表达“清楚地记得”。这里应使用副词“clearly”，表示“清楚地”。建议根据动词的具体含义选择合适的副词：remember clearly（清楚地记得）。

× I feel super excited back then, even though we got stuck in traffic for a while.

✓ I felt super excited back then, even though we got stuck in traffic for a while.

“back then”表示过去的时间，而且整个故事是在讲童年经历，所以动词“feel”应使用一般过去时“felt”。建议叙述过去发生的事情时，保持动词使用过去式。