Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答立场明确，但句子结构和语法问题较多，例如“see any scene is”“the bird, the cloud...”以及“it’s always made me happy”指代不清。建议使用“because + 完整句子”说明原因，并用“such as”引出具体景物；同时避免重复和无意义的表达。可以补充一个结果，让答案更完整，但控制在2—3句。

例: Yes, definitely. I prefer a window seat because I enjoy looking at the scenery, such as clouds, trees, and mountains. It makes the journey more relaxing and helps me feel happy.

提案: 回答了“是”，但时态和表达不够准确。“Did you have”是在询问童年经历，建议使用一般过去时，如“my family often travelled together”；“travel for another country”应改为“travel to another country”。此外，连接词“because”和“so”重复使用，建议分成两到三句，并具体说明旅程的目的地、活动或感受。

例: Yes, quite often. When I was a child, my family often travelled to other countries together, usually during the summer holidays. The journeys were sometimes long, but I enjoyed talking with my family and seeing new places.

× Yes it's often because my family is living together so if we travel for another country, we always go together so I love this travel.

✓ Yes, often. When I was a child, my family lived together, so whenever we travelled to another country, we went together. I loved travelling with my family.

列举多个景物时，通常需要使用复数形式，例如 birds、clouds 和 trees。使用复数可以清楚地表达“鸟、云和树”等多个事物。

× Yes it's often because my family is living together so if we travel for another country, we always go together so I love this travel.

✓ Yes, often. When I was a child, my family lived together, so whenever we travelled to another country, we went together. I loved travelling with my family.

问题询问的是你小时候的经历，因此应该使用一般过去时。将 is living、travel、go 和 love 分别改为 lived、travelled、went 和 loved。回答过去经历时，要确保主要动词保持过去时。

× Yes for sure because I like to see any scene is for example is the bird, the cloud the sun and the tree ebby cheat and it's always made me happy.

✓ Yes, for sure, because I like to see birds, clouds, the sun, and trees, and it always makes me happy.

这里表达的是现在通常的喜好，所以应该使用一般现在时。it always makes me happy 表示“它总是让我开心”；不能使用 it’s always made me，因为该结构不适合表达现在的日常感受。

× Yes it's often because my family is living together so if we travel for another country, we always go together so I love this travel.

✓ Yes, often. When I was a child, my family lived together, so whenever we travelled to another country, we went together. I loved travelling with my family.

表示“去另一个国家旅行”时，应使用 travel to another country，而不是 travel for another country。表示目的地时，travel 通常与介词 to 搭配。

× Yes it's often because my family is living together so if we travel for another country, we always go together so I love this travel.

✓ Yes, often. When I was a child, my family lived together, so whenever we travelled to another country, we went together. I loved travelling with my family.

动词 love 后面可以接动名词，表示“喜欢做某事”，所以应说 love travelling，而不是 love this travel。使用 travelling with my family 能更自然、准确地表达“喜欢和家人一起旅行”。

× Yes for sure because I like to see any scene is for example is the bird, the cloud the sun and the tree ebby cheat and it's always made me happy.

✓ Yes, for sure, because I like to see birds, clouds, the sun, and trees, and it always makes me happy.

原句中 like to see 后面出现了多余且错误的结构 is for example is，导致句子结构混乱。可以直接使用 like to see + 名词并列结构，例如 see birds, clouds, the sun, and trees。

× Yes it's often because my family is living together so if we travel for another country, we always go together so I love this travel.

✓ Yes, often. When I was a child, my family lived together, so whenever we travelled to another country, we went together. I loved travelling with my family.

原句包含多个 so，句子过长，逻辑关系不清。可以拆分成几个短句，并使用 when、so 和 whenever 连接不同的时间和因果关系，使回答更清楚、更符合英语句子结构。