Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本切题，也表达了偏好和原因，但有明显语法错误和不自然搭配。应说“prefer sitting”或“prefer to sit”，以及“the aisle”而不是“corridor”；“it is convenient for me to get a washroom”应改为“it is convenient for me to get to the restroom”。建议先直接表明选择，再用连接词补充一个具体原因，注意在两个完整句子之间使用“because”或“as”。

例: I prefer sitting by the aisle when I travel. It is more convenient because I can get up and go to the restroom easily without disturbing other passengers.

提案: 答案没有直接回答问题，内容与“小时候是否和家人进行过长途旅行”基本无关，因此连贯性和有效性很低。应先明确回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”，然后补充旅行地点、时长、同行家人以及一次具体经历。注意使用过去时，例如“went”“spent”和“was”，并用“because”“so”或“although”连接细节。

例: Yes, I did. When I was about ten, my family and I took a seven-day trip to Japan. It was a long journey, but I really enjoyed visiting different destinations and spending time with my family.

× I don't prefer sit by the window when I travel I would prefer sits by corridor because it is convenient for me to get a washroom.

✓ I don't prefer sitting by the window when I travel; I would prefer sitting in the corridor because it is convenient for me to get to a washroom.

原句把两个完整句子直接连接在一起，缺少句号、分号或连词，造成句子结构错误。建议在一个句子中表达两个独立意思时，使用分号，或用“but”“and”等连词连接。

× I don't prefer sit by the window when I travel I would prefer sits by corridor because it is convenient for me to get a washroom.

✓ I don't prefer sitting by the window when I travel; I would prefer sitting in the corridor because it is convenient for me to get to a washroom.

“prefer”后面可以接动名词，因此应使用“prefer sitting”，不能使用“prefer sit”或“prefer sits”。另外，“would prefer”后也应保持动词形式一致，使用“sitting”。

× I don't prefer sit by the window when I travel I would prefer sits by corridor because it is convenient for me to get a washroom.

✓ I don't prefer sitting by the window when I travel; I would prefer sitting in the corridor because it is convenient for me to get to a washroom.

表示在走廊里面坐，应使用介词“in”，所以是“sitting in the corridor”。“get”表示到达某个地方时，通常需要搭配“to”，所以应说“get to a washroom”。

× I don't prefer sit by the window when I travel I would prefer sits by corridor because it is convenient for me to get a washroom.

✓ I don't prefer sitting by the window when I travel; I would prefer sitting in the corridor because it is convenient for me to get to a washroom.

“corridor”是可数名词，前面需要冠词。这里指特定的走廊，应使用“the corridor”。“washroom”是单数可数名词，前面需要使用“a”，所以是“a washroom”。

× Guests are used to visit Japan infrequently before range from seven days this week is a good time for visiting different destinations

✓ Yes, I did. My family and I used to take long trips, usually lasting about seven days, to different destinations.

问题使用“Did you...?”询问童年经历，因此回答应使用过去时。“are used to”是现在时，不能表达过去的习惯。表达过去经常做某事时，应使用“used to + 动词原形”，例如“used to take”。

× Guests are used to visit Japan infrequently before range from seven days this week is a good time for visiting different destinations

✓ Yes, I did. My family and I used to take long trips, usually lasting about seven days, to different destinations.

如果使用“be used to”，后面必须接动名词，例如“are used to visiting”。但本题是在描述童年时的过去习惯，所以更合适的结构是“used to take”，而不是“are used to visit”。

× Guests are used to visit Japan infrequently before range from seven days this week is a good time for visiting different destinations

✓ Yes, I did. My family and I used to take long trips, usually lasting about seven days, to different destinations.

原句包含多个意思，但没有清晰的主语、谓语和连接关系，导致句子结构不完整且难以理解。回答此类问题时，建议使用清晰的结构：“Yes, I did. + 主语 + used to + 动词原形 + 补充信息。”