Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap basit ve anlaşılır ancak dilbilgisi hataları, eksik cümle yapısı ve sınırlı ayrıntı var. Öncelikle doğru zaman ve yardımcı fiil kullanımı ("when I am travelling") ve sıfat-fiil uyumunu düzeltmelisiniz ("I enjoy looking outside"). Cümlelerinizi birbirine bağlamak için kısa bir neden ve bir örnek ekleyin. Ayrıca maksimum 5 cümleyi aşmayın ve gereksiz tekrardan kaçının.

例: Yes, I usually prefer to sit by the window when I travel because I enjoy watching the scenery. For example, on long bus rides I like to see the countryside change, which helps me relax. Also, sitting by the window gives me more privacy and a better view for taking photos.

提案: Cevapta zaman ifadesi ve anlatım karışık; dilbilgisi ve cümle yapısı büyük ölçüde bozuk. Geçmişteki bir deneyimi anlatırken doğru geçmiş zaman kullanın ("we went to America two years ago"). Ayrıca yolculuğun "uzun" olduğunu açıklamak için spesifik detaylar ekleyin (süre, ulaşım türü, zorluklar veya hatıralar). Cümleleri mantıklı bağlaçlarla ("because", "so", "for example") birleştirin ve 3 cümleyi geçmeyin.

例: Yes, we did. My family often traveled abroad, and two years ago we went to America. It was a very long flight—about twelve hours—which made me tired, but we enjoyed visiting museums and trying new foods.

× Yes I prefer to sit by the window when I travelling because I enjoyable to look outside

✓ Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when I am travelling because I enjoy looking outside

Errors: 'when I travelling' misses auxiliary verb 'am' for present continuous (Grammar problem type 8 and 6); 'I enjoyable to look outside' uses adjective 'enjoyable' incorrectly and wrong verb form. Correct forms: 'I am travelling' (present continuous) and 'I enjoy looking outside' or 'I enjoy looking out.' Suggestion: Use 'am' + present participle for continuous tense and use verb 'enjoy' followed by gerund 'looking' to express liking an activity.

× Yes, my family likes travelling abroad and I'm two years ago we went America it's a ten halves journey

✓ Yes, my family liked travelling abroad and two years ago we went to America; it was a ten-hour journey

Multiple errors: 'likes' should be 'liked' or 'like' depending on meaning but past reference ('two years ago') requires past tense consistency (Grammar problem type 5). 'I'm two years ago' is ungrammatical; remove 'I'm' and start with 'two years ago'. 'went America' misses preposition 'to' after 'went' (Grammar problem type 11). 'it's a ten halves journey' is incorrect phrase: use 'it was a ten-hour journey' (singular compound adjective 'ten-hour' and past tense 'was'). Suggestions: Keep tense consistent (past) when referring to past events, use correct prepositions with movement verbs ('go/went to'), and use correct noun/adj forms for duration ('ten-hour journey').