Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap doğal değil ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. Öncelikle açık bir konu cümlesi kullanın (örn. "Yes, I prefer to sit by the window."). Ardından kısa ve ilgili bir neden verin (örn. manzara görmek veya uçakta daha rahat hissetmek). Bağlaçlar kullanarak ikinci cümlede sebepleri genişletin (because, so, and). Cümleleri 2-3 kısa, doğru ve akıcı cümlede tutun; gereksiz kelimelerden kaçının.

例: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window because I enjoy the view and it helps me relax. Also, having the window seat lets me rest my head against the side, so I can sleep more comfortably during long journeys.

提案: Cevap zaman karışıklığı ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. Geçmişten bahsettiğiniz için geçmiş zaman kullanın (e.g. "When I was a child, we went to Antalya."). Ardından kısa bir detay ekleyin: ne zaman, kimlerle veya ne kadar sürdüğü gibi. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri bağlayın (and, which, so) ve 2-3 cümlede net bilgi verin.

例: Yes, when I was a child my family and I took a long trip to Antalya. We drove there during the summer and stayed for two weeks, which was exciting because I saw the sea for the first time.

× My prefer is the window name any anyway.

✓ I prefer the window seat.

The student used 'prefer' as a noun ('My prefer') and included extraneous words ('name any anyway') that are not meaningful. 'Prefer' is a verb, so the correct structure is 'I prefer + object.' Also use the noun 'seat' to specify the place by the window. Suggestion: use 'I prefer the window seat' or 'I prefer to sit by the window.'

× Yes, I'm going to Antalya in the Altantash traveling.

✓ Yes, I went to Antalya when I was a child.

The examiner asked about past experiences as a child, so the response should be in the past tense. The student's sentence uses present continuous ('I'm going') and contains a nonsensical phrase ('in the Altantash traveling'). Replace with a clear past tense: 'I went to Antalya' and add 'when I was a child' to match the question. Suggestion: use simple past for completed past events (I went, we travelled).