Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Відповідь загалом природна та інформативна, але варто зробити її більш стислішою й граматично коректною. Уникайте розмовних скорочень («yeah») в офіційному тесті, виправляйте часи (present simple) та зменшуйте повтори. Додайте одне-два зв'язні слова для плавності (for example, because, so).

例: I usually sit by the window because I like filming the view during flights. For example, I often record the sky and the cities below, which helps me create more interesting content for my followers.

提案: Відповідь незавершена та має кілька граматичних помилок. Потрібно використовувати правильні часи (past simple для минулих подій), уникати розмовних формулювань («so good») і завершувати думку. Додайте конкретні деталі (куди їхали, скільки часу тривало, що запам’яталося) і зв’язки між реченнями.

例: I think so. When I was a child my family took a long trip to Alanya in Turkey. We first travelled from my hometown to the airport, and then flew to Antalya before driving to Alanya. The journey lasted about eight hours in total, and I remember being excited to see the sea and the ancient sites.

× I usually prefer sitting by the window because I'm a small influencer and I like to film the view during flight.

✓ I usually prefer to sit by the window because I'm a small influencer and I like to film the view during the flight.

The verb 'prefer' is commonly followed by the infinitive 'to sit' or the gerund 'sitting', but in this context 'prefer to sit' sounds more natural with 'by the window'. Also 'during flight' requires the definite article 'the' to refer to a specific period (the flight). Use 'to sit' for a clearer, more idiomatic expression and add 'the' before 'flight'. Suggestion: use 'I usually prefer to sit by the window' and 'during the flight'.

× I don't remember it so good but I think yes I had a long journey when I have travelling with my family to Turkey, Alania.

✓ I don't remember it very well, but I think I did have a long journey when I was travelling with my family to Alanya, Turkey.

Several tense and adverb issues: 'so good' is incorrect; use the adverb 'very well'. When referring to a past event, use past simple (I did have) or past continuous (I was travelling) rather than 'have travelling' which mixes tenses. Also word order for place is usually 'Alanya, Turkey'. Suggestion: say 'I don't remember it very well, but I think I did have a long journey when I was travelling with my family to Alanya, Turkey.'

× We go first we went from my city to

✓ First, we went from my city to...

Mixes present ('We go') and past ('we went'). For a past narrative use past tense only: 'First, we went from my city to...'. Remove the present 'go'. Suggestion: narrate past events using past simple consistently, e.g., 'First, we went from my city to...'. Flughtplace name or continuation should follow.