Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar and fluency: correct verb forms and articles, reduce redundancy, and add a linking phrase and specific detail. Keep answer within 2–4 sentences. For example, say you enjoy scenery and mention what you like to see.

例: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when I travel because I enjoy watching the scenery. For example, I like spotting mountains, rivers and small villages as we pass them, which makes the journey more relaxing and interesting.

提案: Focus on clear past-tense grammar and concise structure: give a direct topic sentence, then one specific supporting detail using linking words. Correct articles and verb forms (e.g., 'the countryside', 'for higher education', 'the city has'). Avoid filler sounds like 'uh'.

例: Yes, I did. When I was a child my family moved from the countryside to the city for higher education and better job opportunities. As a result, we had access to good schools and more services, which improved our daily life.

× 'Yes, I definitely prefer see it by the window when I traveling because I really enjoy watching the beautiful natures and places.'

✓ 'Yes, I definitely prefer to sit by the window when I travel because I really enjoy watching the beautiful nature and places.'

'prefer see' is incorrect: after prefer we need the infinitive with to (Grammar type 6 overlap with verb form), so use 'prefer to sit'. 'when I traveling' lacks the correct present simple form: use 'when I travel' for habitual actions. 'natures' is countable error: 'nature' is uncountable. Suggestion: use 'prefer to + verb' for preferences and use the simple present for habitual actions.'},{