Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答总体明确，但存在重复、句子不够流畅且细节较少。建议避免重复词汇（例如“I can I can”），使用连词丰富句子结构，并补充具体细节来支撑观点，比如你喜欢看什么类型的风景或者为什么喜欢窗边座位（放松、拍照、避免晕动等）。还要注意保持回答在最多五句内。

例: Yes, I usually prefer a window seat when I travel by train or plane because I enjoy watching the scenery. For example, on trains I like to see the countryside and small villages pass by, and on planes I find watching the clouds and approaching landscapes relaxing. Also, a window seat lets me take photos and feel more comfortable during long journeys.

提案: 回答直接且相关，但比较简短，缺少具体细节和连贯性。建议补充时间、旅行目的、印象深刻的经历或感受，例如旅途的长度、与奶奶的互动或到达目的地后的记忆。使用连接词使回答更加自然流畅，同时控制在五句之内。

例: Yes, when I was a child I took a long flight to the US with my grandmother for a family visit. I remember it was my first time on a plane and I felt both excited and nervous. During the trip my grandmother told me stories and helped me sleep, which made the long journey much easier.

× Well, yes I prefer to sit by the window when traveling by train or airplane because I can I can watch the scene.

✓ Well, yes. I prefer to sit by the window when travelling by train or airplane because I can watch the scenery.

问题类型对应于“句子结构错误”（ID 26）和“动词重复/第三人称无关”（在给定列表中最接近的是句子结构错误）。原句中出现“because I can I can watch”重复，导致句子不通顺。另建议将“scene”改为“scenery”，更符合英语中描述风景时的用法；同时在“yes”后加句号或逗号以改善语流。改正建议：删除重复的“I can”，使用“scenery”代替“scene”，并注意标点和小写/拼写（travelling/traveling 可按英式或美式一致）。

× Yes, when I was a child I went to the US with my grandma and we took airplanes together

✓ Yes. When I was a child, I went to the US with my grandma and we flew by airplane together.

问题类型主要为“句子结构错误”（ID 26）和“冠词/用词问题”（在列表中对应“Article errors”或“词汇使用”最接近）。原句中“took airplanes”用法不自然，英语中通常说“flew by airplane”或“took a plane/the plane”。另外在“Yes”后加标点，并在从句前后加逗号以改善可读性。改正建议：将“took airplanes”改为“flew by airplane”或“took a plane”，并添加必要标点。