Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap doğal değil ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. Önce soruya doğrudan kısa bir konu cümlesi kullanın (ör. 'Yes, I prefer the window seat'). Sonra bir veya iki destekleyici neden verin ve bağlaçlar kullanın (ör. 'because' veya 'so'). Ayrıca özne-fiil uyumu ve kelime seçimine dikkat edin ('prefer to sit by me' yanlış; doğru kullanım 'sit by the window' veya 'sit by the window seat'). Cümle sayısını 3-4 ile sınırlayın ve gereksiz genellemelerden kaçının.

例: Yes, I prefer the window seat because I enjoy the view and it feels more private. Also, I like to rest against the wall when the journey is long, so I can sleep more comfortably.

提案: Cevap açık ama gramer ve kelime sıralaması hataları var. Önce doğrudan cevap verin ('Yes, I did'). Ardından net ve spesifik detaylar ekleyin; geçmiş zaman kullanımı tutarlı olmalı (simple past: 'we went', 'it took', 'I was bored'). Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi düzenleyin (ör. 'because' veya 'so'). Gereksiz artikelleri düzeltin ('to Ankara' yerine 'to Ankara' doğru; 'the Ankara' yanlış).

例: Yes, I did. When I was a child we went to Ankara with my family and the trip took about eight hours, so I felt very bored. To pass the time we listened to music and played simple games, which helped a little.

× I think everybody prefer to sit by me now.

✓ I think everybody prefers to sit by me now.

The subject 'everybody' is singular, so the verb must take the third person singular form 'prefers'. Use 'prefers' instead of 'prefer' to match subject-verb agreement. Also note 'by me' is colloquial but acceptable here; if you want to be more natural, use 'next to me' instead.

× Yes, we went to the Ankara with my family and it took 8 hours and I remember that I was really bored when I going there.

✓ Yes, we went to Ankara with my family; it took 8 hours, and I remember that I was really bored when I was going there.

Do not use the definite article before most city names in English, so use 'Ankara' instead of 'the Ankara'. Also the sentence has verb tense and structure issues: 'when I going there' is ungrammatical — the past continuous 'was going' is required to fit the past context. Add punctuation to separate clauses for clarity. The corrected version uses 'went to Ankara', 'it took 8 hours', and 'I was really bored when I was going there' to maintain consistent past tense and correct verb forms.