Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は意味が通じますが、文法と表現の自然さを改善する必要があります。具体的には、時制と単語選び（"encourage my expecting"は不自然）、冠詞や動名詞の使い方を直してください。また、トピック文の後に短い理由や具体例を一つ加えるとより効果的です。発話は簡潔に5文以内にまとめましょう。

例: I prefer to sit by the window when travelling because I enjoy watching the changing landscape. For example, I like seeing mountains and villages pass by, which makes the journey more interesting. Also, sitting by the window lets me take photos and relax during long trips.

提案: 内容は理解できますが、文法（時制・語順）と語句選択（"thought about the Hokkaido"は不自然、"both nature"の使い方）を改善してください。過去の経験を述べるときは過去形を一貫して使い、具体的なエピソードや感情を一つ加えると説得力が増します。簡潔な接続詞を使って論理的につなげましょう。

例: Yes, I had a long family trip to Hokkaido when I was a child. I remember being fascinated by the beautiful nature there, such as forests and lakes. That experience made me want to travel more and explore other places in Japan.

× I like to sit by the window when traveling because I am excited by the changing landscape and it's encourage my expecting.

✓ I like to sit by the window when traveling because I am excited by the changing landscape and it encourages my expectations.

The clause 'it's encourage my expecting' has multiple issues: 'it's' (it is) followed by base verb 'encourage' is incorrect because third person singular requires 'encourages' (subject-verb agreement, Grammar Problem Type ID 2/27). Also 'my expecting' is not a natural noun phrase in English; the correct noun is 'expectations'. Use 'it encourages my expectations' to convey that the view increases your expectations. Suggestion: use third person singular verb 'encourages' and replace 'expecting' with the noun 'expectations'.

× Yes, I thought about the Hokkaido in my childhood. I at that time I was curious about both nature and I want to travel more.

✓ Yes, I remember Hokkaido from my childhood. At that time I was curious about nature and wanted to travel more.

Multiple problems: 'I thought about the Hokkaido in my childhood' is awkward; use 'I remember Hokkaido from my childhood' or 'I visited Hokkaido as a child' (sentence structure, Grammar Problem Type ID 26). 'I at that time I was curious about both nature and I want to travel more' has redundant pronoun and tense inconsistency: remove extra 'I', use past tense 'wanted' to match 'at that time' (past tense issue, Grammar Problem Type ID 5/6). 'both nature' is incorrect because 'both' requires two items; simply use 'nature'. Suggestion: reorganize into two clear sentences and make verb tenses consistent.