Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 语法和时态需要纠正，句子应直接回答并简洁展开；用更自然的表达描述喜欢窗边的原因并提供具体细节。同时注意词汇准确（如“playing”→不合适，‘wheels’用词错误），控制在不超过5句。可使用连接词让信息连贯。

例: Yes, I usually prefer a window seat when I travel because I enjoy looking outside. For example, I like watching changing landscapes and interesting scenes like farms or rivers pass by. It helps me relax and makes the journey more enjoyable.

提案: 回答需更清晰地叙述一次具体经历，注意句子连贯与标点，避免重复词汇。提供具体细节（时间、活动、感受或结果），并使用连接词（for example, because, so）来组织信息，句子总数不超过5句。

例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, my parents and I took a long trip to Junan because my mother loves flowers. We visited several local flower gardens and markets, and I remember picking up a few postcards as souvenirs. It was a memorable trip because the scenery was so beautiful and my mother was very happy.

× Yes, of course when I played I like sit by the window because I can see many wheels outdoor.

✓ Yes, of course. When I travel I like to sit by the window because I can see many places outside.

问题类型：现在时态以及动词形式和副词位置。解释：原句混用了过去时“played”和一般现在时“like”，造成时态不一致；动词“like”后应接不定式“to sit”或动名词“sitting”；“outdoor”用法不正确，常用作形容词，表示“户外”的副词应为“outside”；此外语序和标点需调整。建议：根据问题（偏好）使用一般现在时；把“when I played”改为表示通常情形的短语如“When I travel”或“When I’m traveling”；将“like sit”改为“like to sit”或“like sitting”；用“outside”替换“outdoor”。

× Yes, of course I went to Junan with my parents when I was a child because my mother is a big fan of flowers we went to local flower flower.

✓ Yes, of course. I went to Junan with my parents when I was a child because my mother is a big fan of flowers, so we went to the local flower market.

问题类型：过去时态与句子结构问题。解释：句子缺少连接词导致句子结构不完整；“flower flower”重复且不自然，应为“flower market”或类似短语；“local”前需加定冠词“the”或置于可数名词前；应该用过去时保持时态一致，句中已用过去时“went”和“was”，只需添加连词“so”连接原因和结果。建议：使用标点或连词把句子分开或连接，移除重复词，改为常见搭配如“the local flower market”。