Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答自然且相关，但可更简洁、有层次并加入连接词使语句更连贯。建议先给出主题句，然后补充原因并用一两个具体细节。控制在最多5句内，避免重复“enjoy”与“relax”。

例: Yes, I prefer the window seat because I enjoy watching the landscape go by. Also, it helps me relax—I'll put on some music and sometimes take photos of interesting views.

提案: 回答完整且有具体信息，但可通过加入连接词与一两个具体例子来增强说服力。建议先给出直接肯定，然后说明频率与具体目的地或一次印象深刻的经历，句子不宜过长。

例: Yes, I often went on long trips with my parents when I was a child. For example, we visited Beijing and Shanghai and even took a holiday to Thailand once, which left me with many happy memories.

× Yes, I prefer sitting by the window when traveling because I can enjoy the scenery outside and relax by listening to music at the same time.

✓ Yes, I prefer sitting by the window when traveling because I can enjoy the scenery outside and relax by listening to music at the same time.

学生句子中使用了 prefer + doing 的结构，这是正确的用法，因此无需修改。解释：动词 prefer 后通常接动名词（-ing）或不定式，两者都可，但 prefer + -ing 更常见且自然。建议：保持 prefer + -ing 的结构，注意 travel/travelling 的拼写美式（traveling）与英式（travelling）区别，根据口音选择一致拼写。

× Yes, I often went on long trips with my parents when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I often went on long trips with my parents when I was a child.

句子使用一般过去时（went、was），与“as a child/when I was a child”的时间状语一致，语法正确，无需修改。解释：描述过去习惯性动作时使用过去时（often went）是合适的。建议：若想更强调习惯可用 used to："I often used to go on long trips..."。

× We visited many cities and regions across China, and sometimes we traveled abroad for holidays, which gave me a lot of fond memories.

✓ We visited many cities and regions across China, and sometimes we traveled abroad for holidays, which gave me a lot of fond memories.

整句均为过去时间陈述（visited、traveled、gave），时态一致且正确，因此无需修改。解释：描述过去经历应使用一般过去时；句中 which 引导的定语从句正确指代前面的事实。建议：若想使表达更自然可将 'for holidays' 改为 'on holiday' 或 'for holidays' 也可接受，注意 travel/travelled 拼写美式/英式一致性。