Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 用更自然和准确的表达来回答，注意词汇搭配与语法，并把句子控制在最多五句内。可以把主题句放前面，然后用一两句具体细节支持，使用连接词使逻辑更顺。避免拼写和大小写错误（例如 sentiment → window seat?; Confident → confident）。

例: Yes, I prefer sitting by the window when I travel. I enjoy watching the changing scenery, like fields of flowers and rolling hills, which makes me feel relaxed. Also, I sometimes take photos through the window to remember the journey.

提案: 回答要更清晰并连贯表达原因，避免重复与不自然的词语（voyagers 和 busy for crops 用法不当）。先给出直接简短回答，然后用一两句说明具体原因并举例。注意句子连接与时态一致。

例: No, I didn't. I was focused on my schoolwork as a child, so our family rarely went on long trips. My parents also worked long hours on the farm, which left little time or money for travelling.

× Yes, of course I absolutely enjoy a sentiment window because I can admire plenty of landscapes such as flowers, grasses and so on. It makes me feel relaxed and Confident

✓ Yes, of course. I absolutely enjoy sitting by the window because I can admire many landscapes such as flowers, grass and so on. It makes me feel relaxed and confident.

错误类型：形容词/副词使用不当。说明：原句中“enjoy a sentiment window”用词错误，应使用动名词短语“enjoy sitting by the window”（喜欢坐在窗边）。“sentiment”是名词，意思与语境不符。另，“plenty of landscapes”搭配不自然，改为“many landscapes”。“grasses”在此处通常用不可数“grass”表示草地或草。大写的“Confident”不应首字母大写。建议：使用正确短语“sit/sitting by the window”，将可数/不可数名词和大小写修正；多练习动词+ing结构及名词搭配。

× No, because I was busy with my studies when I was a child I had no time travelling with my family and thus my parents are voyagers.

✓ No, because I was busy with my studies when I was a child, I had no time to travel with my family and thus my parents were not voyagers.

错误类型：过去时使用问题。说明：原句时态和表达不够准确。“had no time travelling with my family”应使用不定式“had no time to travel”来表示没有时间做某事。句子中“thus my parents are voyagers”与上下文时态不一致，描述过去情况应使用过去时“were not voyagers”或更自然说明父母很忙于务农（see next suggestion）。建议：用过去时态保持一致，使用固定表达“have/ had no time to do sth.”，或改为更自然的说明，例如“my parents were busy with farming.”

× They are busy for crops. They are busy with crops always.

✓ They were busy with the crops. They were always busy with the crops.

错误类型：介词使用不当。说明：“busy for crops”是不正确的搭配，应使用“busy with crops”或更自然的“busy with the crops”/“busy with farming”。此外，副词位置“always”应放在动词前或用“were always busy with...”使语序更自然。因为谈论的是过去，应使用过去时“were”。建议：学习常见搭配“busy with sth.”以及副词的位置（例如：were always busy ...），并注意时态一致。