Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 主要问题是语法和表达不自然。应先直接回答并给出原因，然后用连词连接具体细节。注意正确词汇（例如 seat by the aisle 而不是 sit by air），以及时态和代词的使用。可把句子拆成两到三句，保持简洁且信息具体。示例中应包含明确的主题句、原因和举例。

例: I prefer to sit on the aisle. It’s easier to get up and reach my bag, and I can leave the plane quickly after landing.

提案: 回答含糊且语法错误多。应先用正确时态（past）回答，然后给出具体细节，如旅行的目的地、活动、感受或记忆。避免不清楚的词语（如 gesture），用具体描述替换。使用连接词使叙述更连贯。

例: Yes, I did. When I was a child my family and I took a long trip to Kunming in Yunnan. We explored parks and local markets, and I remember enjoying the pleasant weather and trying new foods.

× No, I often sit by air because it easy to go up and to get something or I can get off the plane easily.

✓ No, I often sit by the aisle because it's easy to get up and reach something, and I can get off the plane easily.

问题类型：介词使用错误（或词汇选择不当）和句子其它小错误。原句中用 "sit by air" 不合适，正确的短语是 "sit by the aisle"（坐在过道边）。另外缺少动词 "is"（写作中用缩写 "it's" 更自然），短语 "to go up and to get something" 在此语境中应改为 "get up and reach something" 更地道；并且并列部分需要用连词连接以保持句子通顺。建议记住常用的地点搭配（by the window, by the aisle），并注意主系表结构要完整（主语+系动词+表语）。

× Yes, we'll go to Yunnan Kunming and we play a lot there, but it is so just gesture.

✓ Yes, we used to go to Kunming, Yunnan, and we played a lot there, but it was mostly just for show.

问题类型：时态使用错误（以及句子结构不清）。原句中 "we'll go" 使用将来时不符合回忆童年经历的语境，应该用过去习惯或过去时，如 "we used to go" 或 "we went"。随后 "we play a lot there" 也应改为过去时 "we played a lot there"。最后一句 "it is so just gesture" 语法和表达都不正确，推测意思是“这大多只是形式/做做样子”，因此改为 "it was mostly just for show"。建议在叙述过去经历时统一使用过去时或过去习惯表达（used to, would, simple past），并注意逻辑连贯。