Travelling— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 用更自然和准确的表达来说明你喜欢靠窗的原因，避免含糊的短语与语法错误；控制在不超过5个句子内，并使用连词使句子衔接更流畅。可以改正“in the middle of the sea”这类不符合语境的表述，替换为更合适的词并补充具体细节（如晕车时窗外景色或空气带来的舒缓效果）。

例: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when travelling. I often get car sick, so looking out of the window helps me focus on a fixed point and feel less nauseous. Also, fresh air from the window or seeing the passing scenery makes me more comfortable. For these reasons I usually choose a window seat.

提案: 注意时态和语法一致性，用更简洁的句子表达经历与感受。避免口头语“uh”/“umm”，并使用连词（e.g. and, which）组织细节。提供具体例子（去过哪些地方、旅行时做了什么）能使回答更有说服力。

例: Yes, I often had long journeys with my family when I was a child. We usually travelled by car or train to new places, such as seaside towns and historical sites. Those trips involved exploring local food and visiting museums, which brought us closer together and created many lasting memories.

× I like to see it by the window because I have car sickness and uh, if I sit in the middle of the sea, I might feel, umm, very uncomfortable.

✓ I like to sit by the window because I get carsick, and if I sit in the middle of the car, I might feel very uncomfortable.

错误类型：介词或搭配不当。原句中的 “see it by the window” 用法不自然，应改为 “sit by the window”。“have car sickness” 常用表达为 “get carsick” 或 “have car sickness”，但结合上下文更简洁地用 “get carsick”。“in the middle of the sea” 完全不符合语境，应该为 “in the middle of the car” 或更自然地说 “in the middle seat (of the car)”；因此将其改为 “in the middle of the car”。建议：注意固定搭配（sit by the window, get carsick, middle seat/in the middle of the car），并根据语境选择合适的介词和名词。

× So I already sat between the, uh, windows.

✓ So I usually sit between the windows.

错误类型：时态使用不当。考官提问为一般习惯偏好（Do you prefer…?），学生应使用一般现在时描述习惯。原句使用过去时 “already sat” 与语境不符，且表达也不自然。将其改为 “usually sit” 来表述经常性的坐位习惯。建议：当描述习惯或经常发生的事情时使用一般现在时（I usually/always sit…）。

× Yes I do. When I was a child my family usually took me for a some travels by cars or by trains or we usually went to some places that uh, we have hadn't went to there before and I think it made me feel more closed to my family.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a child my family usually took me on some trips by car or by train, or we usually went to places that we hadn't been to before, and I think it made me feel closer to my family.

包含多种错误： 1) 应答时态不一致：对过去经历的回答应使用过去时，“Yes I do” 应改为 “Yes, I did”。（问题类型：过去时问题） 2) 搭配错误：英语中说 “take someone on a trip” 而不是 “took me for a some travels”；可用 “some trips” 替代 “some travels”。（问题类型：介词/搭配） 3) 复数与单数及冠词错误：不要说 “by cars” 或 “by trains”，应使用单数工具名词作方式短语如 “by car” / “by train”。（问题类型：数的使用/介词） 4) 动词形式和完成时错误：原句 “we have hadn't went to there before” 语法混乱，正确的过去完成时否定为 “we hadn't been to before” 或更简单地 “we hadn't been to those places before”。同时不需要尾随的 “there”。（问题类型：过去分词/过去完成时/多余副词） 5) 形容词使用错误：用 “closed” 错误，正确为 “closer”。（问题类型：形容词/比较级） 建议：根据时间背景一致使用时态；注意固定搭配（take someone on a trip, by car/train）；过去完成时的否定为 hadn’t + past participle（hadn't been）；比较级要用 closer 表示更亲近。