Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make a clear direct answer first, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct grammar (articles, plurals, word order) and linking words like "because" or "so" correctly. Keep it to a maximum of 3–4 sentences and avoid repetition.

例: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. I live on a narrow street in a small town, so most buildings are only one or two storeys high. Because the area is mostly residential, you won’t see skyscrapers nearby.

提案: Answer directly, then explain why with specific reasons and an example. Use correct verbs and vocabulary (e.g., "take photos", "photograph"). Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas, and avoid repeating words.

例: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I find tall or historic structures visually interesting. For example, I like photographing old town halls and modern high-rises to capture their shapes and details.

提案: Give a specific building you want to visit and explain one or two clear reasons. Use correct sentence structure and adjectives, and include a linking phrase such as "because" or "for example." Keep it concise and avoid unrelated words.

例: Yes, I would like to visit the tallest tower in my city because it offers great views of the area. For instance, I want to go to the observation deck to see the skyline and take photographs.

提案: Start with a clear yes/no and then give 1–2 reasons with proper grammar and connectors like "because" or "so." Be specific about advantages or disadvantages (views, convenience, noise). Avoid vague phrases like "anywhere near."

例: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it would give me nice views of the city and be close to public transport. However, I might be concerned about noise from busy streets and prefer a higher floor for more privacy.

× No there are small town because of I live small street because of there are not tall buildings. Mainly there are small towns, small symbols.

✓ No. There are no tall buildings because I live on a small street in a small town. Mainly there are only small houses.

Multiple errors: 1) Article and number: 'small town' needs 'a' or plural; corrected to 'a small town' or 'a small street' — categorized as Article errors (ID 22) and Singular and plural issue (ID 1). 2) Preposition: use 'on a small street' not 'I live small street' — Incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11). 3) 'Because of' is used incorrectly; use 'because' to give a clause reason — Incorrect conjunction use (ID 16). 4) Sentence structure is run-on and unclear — Sentence structure errors (ID 26). Suggestion: Break into clear sentences, include articles ('a', 'the'), use correct prepositions ('on'), and use 'no tall buildings' to express absence.

× Yes, I like potter of buildings because tall tall it's tall and interesting mainly there are all of Gulare.

✓ Yes, I like photos of tall buildings because they are interesting. Many tall buildings are in Gulare.

Errors: 1) Incorrect word choice: 'potter' should be 'photos' — Sentence structure/word choice (ID 26). 2) Redundant and incorrect phrasing 'tall tall it's tall' corrected to 'tall buildings' and 'they are' — Third person plural pronoun with verb agreement issues (ID 27 and ID 2). 3) 'mainly there are all of Gulare' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'Many tall buildings are in Gulare' — Incorrect sentence structure (ID 26) and preposition use (ID 11). Suggestion: Use correct nouns ('photos'), avoid repetition, use pronouns properly ('they are'), and place location phrases after the subject.

× Yes, I like visit tall buildings because very interesting and small and kind I like and I see anywhere.

✓ Yes, I like visiting tall buildings because they are very interesting. I can see them from many places.

Errors: 1) Verb + -ing form: 'like visit' should be 'like visiting' — Verb + -ing form (ID 8). 2) Missing subject and verb in 'because very interesting' — Sentence structure errors (ID 26) and Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs (ID 13). 3) 'small and kind I like' is meaningless here; removed. 4) 'I see anywhere' corrected to 'I can see them from many places' — Incorrect adverb placement and sentence structure (IDs 20 and 26). Suggestion: Use 'like' + gerund for hobbies, include subject + verb in clauses, and express location clearly.

× Yes, I want to live in at all buildings because anywhere near and I see everywhere and many friends.

✓ Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it is near many places, I can see everywhere, and many of my friends live there.

Errors: 1) Article errors: 'in at all buildings' is incorrect; use 'in a tall building' or 'in tall buildings' — Article errors (ID 22) and Singular/plural (ID 1). 2) Modal verb and politeness: 'I want' changed to 'I would like' for natural speech (Modal verb usage ID 4). 3) Sentence structure and prepositions: 'because anywhere near' fixed to 'because it is near many places' — Incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11) and Sentence structure (ID 26). 4) 'I see everywhere' clarified to 'I can see everywhere' — Verb tense/aspect and adverb placement (IDs 6 and 20). Suggestion: Use appropriate articles, choose polite modals for preferences, and write clear reasons with correct prepositions and verbs.