Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap kısa ve eksik kalmış; daha doğal ve tam bir cümle kurun. Ayrıca detay vererek yerin tarifini yapın ve bağlaç kullanarak açıklama ekleyin. Örneğin hangi binanın yüksek olduğunu, kaç katlı olduğunu veya evinizin konumuna göre uzaklığını belirtin.

例: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, a 20-storey apartment block stands just two streets away, and a commercial skyscraper is visible from my balcony.

提案: Cevap doğrudan ama yüzeysel; nedenini daha spesifik olarak açıklayın ve bağlaç kullanın. Fotoğraf çekmeme nedeninizi (ilgi eksikliği, zaman, cep telefonu yokluğu) ve nadiren çekiyorsanız ne zaman çektiğinizi belirtin.

例: Not usually, because I'm not very interested in architecture. However, I sometimes take photos when a building has an unusual design or during festivals when decorations make it look special.

提案: Yanıt mantıklı fakat çelişkili ve kısa. 'Zaten orada yaşıyorum' fikrini daha açık ifade edin ve alternatif olarak ziyaret etmek isteyebileceğiniz başka bir bina olup olmadığını belirtin. Bağlaçlarla cümlenizi genişletin.

例: No, there isn't a particular building I want to visit because I already live in a tall residential building. However, I would like to visit the old cathedral downtown to see its architecture.

提案: Cevap eksik ve dilbilgisi hatası var. "Now" yerine "Not really" veya "No, I don't" gibi net ifadeler kullanın ve nedenini açıklayın. Artıları ve eksileri belirterek cevap daha etkili olur.

例: Not really, because I already live in a tall building and I prefer quieter, low-rise houses. While tall buildings offer great views, they can be noisy and less private.

× Yes, there is

✓ Yes, there are

Incorrect use of the verb 'there is' with a plural noun implied (tall buildings). Use 'there are' for plural subjects. Suggestion: match 'there is/are' to the number of the noun: 'There are tall buildings.'

× I don't because I don't need it

✓ I don't, because I don't need to

The phrase 'need it' is unnatural here; after 'need' when followed by a verb, use the infinitive 'to' (need to). Also include a comma before 'because' for clarity. Suggestion: say 'I don't, because I don't need to (take photos).' or 'I don't because I don't need to take photos.'

× No there isn't because I already live in the building.

✓ No, there aren't, because I already live in a building.

Question asked about 'a building that you would like to visit' (singular), but earlier context asks about tall buildings. The student's 'there isn't' is incorrect with unclear reference; if referring to buildings (plural) use 'there aren't'. Also use comma after 'No' and use 'a building' since not a specific building previously mentioned. Suggestion: 'No, there isn't a building I'd like to visit, because I already live in a building.'

× Now because I already live in the tall building.

✓ Not now, because I already live in a tall building.

Sentence fragment lacking clear adverb and punctuation. 'Now' is not the correct adverb; 'Not now' better answers 'Do you want to live in a tall building?' Also use indefinite article 'a' before 'tall building' unless referring to a specific known building. Suggestion: 'Not now, because I already live in a tall building.'