Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn: Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn. Sửa ngữ pháp và lựa chọn từ (ví dụ: "there are a lot of tall buildings near my home" hay "many high-rise buildings"). Tránh câu lặp và cụm từ không chính xác như "town buildings" nếu ý bạn là chung cư cao tầng. Mở rộng thành 2–3 câu: 1 câu chủ đề + 1 câu chi tiết cụ thể (vị trí, màu sắc, vật liệu hoặc ví dụ).

例: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. For example, several modern high-rise apartments line the main street, and I especially like a glass-fronted building because of its unique design.

提案: Làm rõ mục đích chụp ảnh và đưa ra chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh câu mơ hồ và lặp ý (ví dụ "I can solve it"). Dùng liên từ để nối ý: nói lý do, tần suất và ví dụ (e.g., when I travel or at sunset). Giữ 2–3 câu, đúng ngữ pháp và từ vựng phù hợp ("take photos of buildings", "capture"...).

例: Yes, I often take photos of buildings near my house because I enjoy capturing architectural details. For instance, I like photographing facades at sunset when the light highlights their shapes.

提案: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng: dùng "the tallest skyscraper" thay vì "a tallest skycrabber"; bỏ từ thừa như "and is and". Nên bắt đầu bằng câu trả lời rõ ràng rồi nêu lý do cụ thể (kiến trúc, tầm nhìn, chức năng). Thêm một chi tiết hỗ trợ để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I would love to visit the Glenmark Building in Ho Chi Minh City because it is the tallest skyscraper in Vietnam and its modern design fascinates me. I’m especially interested in going up to the observation deck to enjoy the city view.

提案: Trả lời rõ ràng và ngắn gọn, nêu lý do cụ thể (ví dụ bạn sợ độ cao hoặc thích không gian yên tĩnh). Sửa cấu trúc: dùng câu chủ đề rồi mở rộng bằng 1 câu ví dụ hoặc tình huống. Dùng từ vựng đúng ("afraid of heights", "high-rise apartment", "prefer a low-rise house").

例: I wouldn’t want to live in a tall building because I’m quite afraid of heights. For example, I feel uneasy on high floors and I prefer a low-rise house with a garden where I feel more comfortable.

× Yes, they are very tall buildings.

✓ Yes, there are very tall buildings near my home.

The student used 'they are' which refers to a plural noun but the question asks about existence/placement ('Are there tall buildings near your home?'). The correct structure uses 'there are' to indicate existence. Suggestion: use 'There is/There are' when stating that something exists in a place.

× Sorry, they are a lot of town buildings near my home.

✓ Sorry, there are a lot of buildings in town near my home.

The phrase 'a lot of town buildings' is incorrectly ordered and 'they are' is not appropriate for stating quantity/existence. Use 'a lot of' + noun and place it before location phrasing. Also use 'there are' to indicate existence. Suggestion: say 'There are a lot of buildings in town near my home.'

× This is very beautiful and the structure is very special.

✓ They are very beautiful, and their structures are very special.

The student used singular 'This' to refer to multiple buildings; also 'the structure' is vague. Use plural pronoun 'they' and possessive 'their' when referring back to plural noun. Suggestion: ensure pronoun number matches noun and use plural forms when speaking about multiple buildings.

× I really like taking photos of many beautiful buildings near my house because whenever I need to sort it again, I can.

✓ I really like taking photos of the beautiful buildings near my house because I can look through them again when I need to.

The clause 'sort it again' is unclear and 'it' does not agree with plural 'photos.' Use 'look through them again' or 'sort them again.' Also 'many' is okay but 'the' sounds more natural here. Suggestion: replace vague pronouns with clear references and use correct verb-object agreement.

× I can solve it.

✓ I can organize or review them.

'I can solve it' is unnatural for managing photos; 'solve' implies a problem. Use verbs like 'organize', 'review', or 'sort' with the plural object 'them.' Suggestion: choose a verb that matches the intended action and ensure pronoun agreement.

× Off the top of my head, I would like to visit Glenmark Building in Ho Chi Minh City because it is a tallest skycrabber in Vietnam and is and the design of this is very special for me.

✓ Off the top of my head, I would like to visit the Glenmark Building in Ho Chi Minh City because it is the tallest skyscraper in Vietnam, and its design is very special to me.

Several errors: use of article 'the' before a unique building and superlative requires 'the tallest.' 'Skycrabber' is misspelled; correct is 'skyscraper.' 'is and the design of this' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'its design' to show possession. Suggestion: use 'the' with superlative, correct spelling, and replace awkward phrases with possessive pronouns.

× because it is a tallest skycrabber in Vietnam

✓ because it is the tallest skyscraper in Vietnam

When using the superlative 'tallest' you must include the definite article 'the.' Also 'skyscraper' was misspelled. Suggestion: remember 'the' with superlatives and check spelling.

× and is and the design of this is very special for me.

✓ and its design is very special to me.

The student mixed structures and used 'this' awkwardly; use the possessive pronoun 'its' to refer to the building and 'to me' is the normal collocation. Suggestion: use clear possessive pronouns and natural prepositions.

× Good job!

✓ (No correction needed for the phrase as feedback.)

This is feedback from the examiner; it is not a student sentence answering questions and is acceptable as is.