Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 总体表达自然且信息完整，但有两处问题影响得分：1）有拼写错误（“sky crabber”应为“skyscraper”），会影响词汇准确性；2）略显冗长，第二句可以更简练，避免重复“tall buildings/high rise”。建议注意准确词汇拼写，使用更简洁的句子结构，并加一两个具体细节（例如距离或具体楼宇）以增强内容的具体性。

例: Yes, there are quite a few tall buildings near my home. I live in the city center, so there are many high‑rise apartment blocks and office towers within a five‑minute walk. From my window I can see a landmark glass tower that lights up at night, which makes the area feel lively and modern.

提案: 回答自然且结构清晰，内容具体（旅游、现代与历史建筑、分享社交媒体），不过可增加一两个连接词以增强连贯性，或给出具体例子（比如最喜欢拍的建筑类型或一次印象深刻的拍摄经历）。同时注意避免重复“buildings/capturing”。

例: Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially when I travel. I’m fascinated by both modern and historical architecture, so I usually photograph façades and unique details. For example, last year I photographed the ornate doors of a cathedral in Prague and later posted the best shots on Instagram to remember the trip.

提案: 回答直接但存在用词错误与表述不够具体：1）“economic landmark”不恰当，应为“iconic landmark”或“symbolic landmark”；2）可补充具体原因或期待的体验（例如登塔顶看风景、拍夜景或了解历史）。建议纠正词汇，增加具体细节或个人感受以丰富内容。

例: Yes, I’d love to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris one day. It’s such an iconic landmark, and I’d like to go to the top to enjoy the panoramic views of the city and take photos at sunset. I’m also interested in learning about its history and seeing it lit up at night.

提案: 回答清晰且理由明确，使用了原因和对比（安全、设施、景观）。可通过加入具体细节（例如哪些设施或实际体验）和一两个衔接词使表述更自然、更有说服力。注意“must be amazing”可以改为更肯定的描述如果有亲身经历。

例: Yes, I’d love to live in a tall building. The views from higher floors are fantastic, especially at night when the city lights sparkle. Also, many high‑rise buildings offer secure access, a gym and a rooftop garden, which would make daily life more comfortable and convenient.

× Since I'm in the city, my neighborhood has lots of high rise apartments, office towers, and even a shopping mall in a sky crabber.

✓ Since I'm in the city, my neighborhood has lots of high-rise apartments, office towers, and even a shopping mall in a skyscraper.

句中“sky crabber”是拼写错误，应为“skyscraper”。这不是动词-ing形式问题，但应按可接受的范围进行更正为正确名词拼写。建议注意常见词汇拼写并多查字典以避免拼写错误。

× The view from my window includes several tall buildings which makes the area feel really lively and modern.

✓ The view from my window includes several tall buildings, which make the area feel really lively and modern.

这里的先行词是“several tall buildings”（复数），关系从句谓语动词应与之保持主谓一致，使用复数动词“make”。原句用单数“makes”导致主谓不一致。建议在遇到which引导的非限制性定语从句时，确认先行词的单复数以使用正确动词形式。

× I find both modern architecture and old historical buildings fascinating, so I love capturing them on camera.

✓ I find both modern architecture and old, historical buildings fascinating, so I love capturing them on camera.

“old historical buildings”听起来冗余，通常用“old, historical buildings”或直接“historical buildings”。此处添加逗号或选择其中一个形容词更自然。建议学习形容词并列时是否需要逗号及避免重复意义的形容词叠加。

× It's such an economic landmark and I think it would be amazing to see it in person, especially because it's so romantic and has appeared in so many movies and photos.

✓ It's such an iconic landmark and I think it would be amazing to see it in person, especially because it's so romantic and has appeared in so many movies and photos.

原句使用“economic landmark”意义不符，应该是“iconic landmark”（标志性地标）。这是词汇选择错误，属于形容词/形容词短语使用不当。建议多积累固定搭配并在不确定时查词典或例句。

× The view from the top floors, especially at night when the city lights are on, must be amazing.

✓ The view from the top floors, especially at night when the city lights are on, must be amazing.

原句语法正确，无需更改。此处返回原句以表明已检查并确认无语法错误。

× Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially when I travel.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially when I travel.

句子语法和时态正确，无需更改。已确认为正确用法。

× I usually share these photos on social media, and it's a great way to remember the places I've visited.

✓ I usually share these photos on social media, and it's a great way to remember the places I've visited.

句子时态和结构正确，无需修改。

× Yes, I'd love to live in a tall building.

✓ Yes, I'd love to live in a tall building.

句子使用情态动词和不定式表达愿望，语法正确，无需修改。

× Plus, these buildings often have better security and modern facilities, which makes life more comfortable and convenient.

✓ Plus, these buildings often have better security and modern facilities, which make life more comfortable and convenient.

关系从句的先行词是复数“these buildings”，从句谓语动词应使用复数“make”，原句使用“makes”导致主谓不一致。建议在复数先行词引导的从句中使用复数动词。