Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Melhore a precisão e a gramática, use uma frase tópica clara e corrija erros como "leaving it" para "living in". Seja mais conciso e natural: uma sentença de tópico seguida por uma curta explicação; evite repetições.

例: Not really. I live in a residential area with many houses close together, but if you go to the city centre you can find many tall buildings and skyscrapers.

提案: Corrija pequenas imprecisões e escolha formas naturais: prefira "I don't take as many photos as I used to" e corrija "interesting architecture" sem artigo errado. Use uma ligação curta para clarificar o contraste.

例: I don't take as many photos as I used to, but if I see a modern building or an interesting skyscraper I like to take a photo of it.

提案: Corrija erros de escolha de palavras como "interesting" em vez de "interested" e torne a resposta mais direta. Diga qual edifício ou tipo de edifício especificamente e explique porquê brevemente, usando conectores como "because".

例: I would like to visit a skyscraper in Dubai because of their striking designs. For example, I'd love to see the Burj Khalifa and take photos to share on social media.

提案: Melhore a fluidez e corrija pequenos erros como "living a tall building" → "living in a tall building". Use uma frase tópica clara e depois dê duas razões específicas e concisas.

例: No, I wouldn't. I prefer a house because it's more spacious and would allow me to have a garden where I can grow plants and vegetables.

× Not really to be honest.

✓ Not really, to be honest.

This sentence needs a comma to separate the introductory phrase 'to be honest' from the main clause for correct sentence structure and natural flow. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× The reason that I'm leaving it is a residential area so you can spot lots of houses next to each other.

✓ The reason I'm leaving it is that it is a residential area, so you can spot lots of houses next to each other.

The sentence lacks 'that' after 'reason' and needs a clause connecting verb 'it is'. Also a comma is needed before 'so' joining the clauses. Use 'that it is a residential area' for clear sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Not as much as I used to take when I was younger, but nowadays if I spot any modern building or a skyscraper with an interesting architecture, I am fond to take a snapshot of it.

✓ Not as much as I used to when I was younger, but nowadays if I spot any modern building or skyscraper with interesting architecture, I like to take a snapshot of it.

Remove redundant 'take' after 'used to' (used to + base verb implied). 'Am fond to' is incorrect; use 'like to'. 'An interesting architecture' is uncountable; use 'interesting architecture' or 'an interesting building'. Also maintain present simple for habitual action. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× In Dubai you can find lots of tall buildings alongside the coast, so I'm really interesting to go and visit one of those types of skyscrapers.

✓ In Dubai you can find lots of tall buildings along the coast, so I'm really interested in going to visit one of those skyscrapers.

Use 'along the coast' rather than 'alongside the coast'. 'Interesting' is an adjective meaning causing interest; use 'interested' to describe the speaker. After 'interested' use 'in' + gerund: 'interested in going'. 'Go and visit' can be simplified to 'going to visit'. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× In addition to that, I believe that I would take snapshots to post on my social media and show the world what they're missing out.

✓ In addition to that, I believe that I would take snapshots to post on my social media and show the world what they're missing out on.

The phrasal verb is 'miss out on' so the preposition 'on' is required at the end. Maintain gerund structure and preposition for correct idiom. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Not really. I don't think I have any interest in living a tall building.

✓ Not really. I don't think I have any interest in living in a tall building.

The verb 'living' requires the preposition 'in' to indicate location. Missing preposition causes sentence structure error. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I much prefer to live in a house where it can be spacious and have an area to cultivate my plants and have a vegetable garden.

✓ I much prefer to live in a house where it can be spacious and where I can have an area to cultivate my plants and a vegetable garden.

The original mixes subject references. Use 'where I can have' to show who performs the actions. Also repeat 'where' for clarity and use 'a vegetable garden' as a noun phrase. This fixes structure and adjective/adverb misuse. Grammar problem type ID: 13