Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 文法と語順の誤りが多く、意味が分かりにくいです。まずは主語と述語を明確にし、形容詞や名詞の使い方を正すことが重要です。さらに具体性を加えるために、「どのくらい高いか」「どの距離にあるか」「その建物の用途（オフィス、マンションなど）」を短く付け加える練習をしてください。話す際は1〜2文で簡潔に答え、必要なら接続詞でつなぎましょう。

例: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. Most of them are residential high-rises about ten to twenty minutes' walk from my apartment, and a few office towers are located closer to the city center.

提案: 内容は伝わりますが、冗長な表現と語彙の不自然さが見られます。否定表現を簡潔にし、理由を述べる際は“because”以外の接続表現を使って変化を出しましょう。また“construction way”や“that much”の代替語を使い、具体例（特にどんな違いが興味深いか）を一つ加えると良いです。文は2〜3文でまとめましょう。

例: I don't usually photograph buildings, but I take many pictures of them when I travel abroad. The architectural styles and materials are often very different from those in Japan, which I find fascinating—for example, many European churches have intricate stone carvings.

提案: 答えは明確ですがやや冗長で語彙の繰り返しがあります。“a lot of”や“in the future”を減らし、具体的に一つか二つの建物（国や名前）を挙げると説得力が増します。接続詞を使って理由を簡潔に述べ、最大5文以内に収めましょう。

例: Yes, I would love to visit historical buildings in Europe, such as the Colosseum in Rome and Notre-Dame in Paris. I'm interested in their architecture and long histories, which are very different from buildings in Japan.

提案: 理由は述べていますが、発話に詰まりや繰り返し（"I I I"）が見られ、文法も不自然です。まず短い主文で意見を述べ、次に一つか二つの理由を明確に述べましょう。また過去の経験を話す際は時制と語順に注意してください。恐怖の理由（高所恐怖や環境の違い）を具体的に説明すると良いです。

例: I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because I'm uncomfortable with heights. I grew up in a rural house and am used to living on the ground or low floors, so high-rise living would feel strange to me.

× My near my home they had a lot of whole buildings.

✓ Near my home, there are a lot of tall buildings.

The original sentence has redundant and incorrect word order and wrong word choice ('whole' instead of 'tall'), and mixes past tense 'had' with a present-state question. Use a clear subject and verb: 'there are' to describe current existence, and 'tall' for building height. Suggestion: start with a prepositional phrase 'Near my home,' then use 'there are' + plural noun.

× I actually don't take photos of buildings so much that much, but when I travel abroad, I take many pictures of buildings because the construction way was a little bit different from Japanese, so it's interesting.

✓ I don't take many photos of buildings at home, but when I travel abroad I take many pictures of buildings because construction methods are a little different from those in Japan, so it's interesting.

The original uses awkward adverb phrases ('so much that much') and incorrect noun phrase 'construction way'. Also mixing singular/plural and comparison: use 'construction methods' and 'those in Japan'. Keep present simple for habitual actions. Suggestion: replace redundant adverb phrases with 'many' or 'often', and use 'construction methods' and 'those in Japan' for clarity.

× Actually, I have a lot of buildings that I want to visit in the future. For example, on historical sites in overseas, especially in Europe, there are a lot of historical buildings, so I want to visit there in the future.

✓ Actually, I want to visit many buildings in the future. For example, at historical sites overseas, especially in Europe, there are many historical buildings, so I want to visit them in the future.

Problems: wordy and awkward phrasing ('on historical sites in overseas'), incorrect pronoun 'there' to refer to buildings, and repetition. Use 'at historical sites overseas' and refer to buildings with 'them'. Keep future intention with 'want to' + verb.

× I don't want to live in the tall building because it scares me a lot.

✓ I don't want to live in a tall building because it scares me a lot.

Using the definite article 'the' implies a specific building, but the speaker means living in any tall building. Use the indefinite article 'a'. Suggestion: use 'a tall building' for general statements.

× My parents house was in rural areas so I I I used to live in the like first or second floor.

✓ My parents' house was in a rural area, so I used to live on the first or second floor.

Multiple issues: missing possessive apostrophe (parents'), incorrect plural 'rural areas' when speaking of one house location ('a rural area'), repeated filler 'I I I', wrong preposition for floor ('on' not 'in'), and unnecessary 'the like'. Use past tense 'used to live' correctly and clean up fillers. Suggestion: write 'My parents' house was in a rural area, so I used to live on the first or second floor.'