Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答自然且信息充分，但可略微精简并加入更明确的连接词以提高连贯性；此外可以补充一两句关于你对高楼感受或影响的个人看法以增强内容深度。

例: Yes, I live in a high-rise apartment complex. Most buildings there are over 20 stories, and there is also a commercial office tower nearby. Next to it is a shopping mall with changing lights every night, which makes the area quite lively. I enjoy the vibrant atmosphere, though sometimes the lights can be a little distracting at night.

提案: 回答清晰且内容具体，詞彙適當。改進空間在於使用更恰當的單數/複數一致（reflect → reflect）並加入一個連接詞以強化句子流暢度；還可略述拍照用途（如社交媒體或個人收藏）以增加細節。

例: Yes, I often photograph buildings because many of them feature unique local murals and architectural details that reflect the city's culture. I also like capturing the contrast between the modern skyline and historic landmarks, which shows how the city has developed over time. I usually share my best shots on social media and keep others in a personal gallery.

提案: 回答内容有文化深度，表述自然。但应避免句子断开（用 and 开头的句子略显口语化），可用连接词使句子更正式，并加入具体期待的活动（如参观展览或拍照）以丰富内容。

例: I'm eager to visit Huanghe Tower in Wuhan because it's closely associated with many famous classical Chinese poems and offers great insight into China's literary history. From the top, I expect to see beautiful calligraphy displays and panoramic views of the Yangtze River, which would be perfect for photography and learning more about the poems' backgrounds.

提案: 回答简洁明确，表达个人理由清晰。可小幅改进语法细节（around 而非 round）并在结尾用一两句说明为何花园对你重要（例如心理放松或家庭生活）。

例: No, I'd prefer a house with a small garden because I enjoy growing plants and having some greenery around. My dog would also have space to run and play outdoors, and having a garden helps me relax and spend quality time with family.

× I live in a high rise apartment complex.

✓ I live in a high-rise apartment complex.

“high rise” 在此作复合形容词修饰名词时应使用连字符，构成“high-rise”。连字符能让读者明确这是一个整体形容词，符合英语书写习惯。建议：在两个或多个词共同修饰名词且位于名词前时使用连字符（例如：well-known author, full-time job）。

× Most buildings there are over 20 stories and there is also a commercial office tower in my district.

✓ Most buildings there are over 20 stories, and there is also a commercial office tower in my district.

原句语法本身主谓一致正确，但两个并列分句之间需要逗号连接以提高可读性（尤其在较长句子中）。这里并非严格的主谓错误，但属于句子结构和标点使用应优化。建议：当并列分句较长或首句为完整句时，在连接词前加逗号。

× Next to it is a shopping mall that has changing lights every night which makes the area quite lively.

✓ Next to it is a shopping mall that has changing lights every night, which makes the area quite lively.

关系代词引导的非限定性定语从句在前面主句完整时应与主句用逗号分开；此处“which makes the area quite lively”是对整句的补充说明，应使用逗号。此外，“changing lights every night”语法可接受，但加逗号更清晰。建议：在非限定性定语或补充说明前使用逗号以明确结构。

× I often photograph buildings because many of them feature unique local murals and architectural details that reflects the city's culture.

✓ I often photograph buildings because many of them feature unique local murals and architectural details that reflect the city's culture.

主语“architectural details”是复数，关系代词引导的从句谓语动词应与其一致，使用“reflect”而不是“reflects”。原句中动词“reflects”错误地用于复数主语。建议：识别关系从句的先行词（这里是复数）并使动词与其数保持一致。

× I also like capturing the modern skyline and historic landmarks as contrasting examples of a city's development.

✓ I also like capturing the modern skyline and historic landmarks as contrasting examples of a city's development.

该句语法正确，无需修改。仅说明：句子结构完整，时态与语境一致。建议：保持原句即可。

× I'm eager to visit Huanghe Tower in Wuhan because it's closely associated with many famous classic Chinese poems and offers a wonderful insight of China's literary history.

✓ I'm eager to visit Huanghe Tower in Wuhan because it's closely associated with many famous classic Chinese poems and offers wonderful insight into China's literary history.

短语“insight of”用法不当，正确搭配为“insight into”或“an insight into”。此外“a wonderful insight”可去掉不定冠词以更自然，或改为“a wonderful insight into”。建议：常见搭配记忆并使用“insight into”来表达“对……的深入了解”。

× And I can see the calligraphy and the beauty of Yangtze River from the top.

✓ And I can see the calligraphy and the beauty of the Yangtze River from the top.

专有名词“The Yangtze River”通常须带定冠词“the”。此外，短语“from the top”可保留以指从塔顶观望，语法正确。建议：记住一些河流、海洋等地名前习惯使用定冠词。

× No, I'd prefer a house with a small garden.

✓ No, I'd prefer a house with a small garden.

句子语法正确，无需修改。说明：形容词用法恰当，时态与语境一致。建议：保持原句。

× I enjoy growing plants and having some greenery round, and my dog would also have space to run and play outdoors.

✓ I enjoy growing plants and having some greenery around, and my dog would also have space to run and play outdoors.

单词“round”在此处用法不标准，英式口语可用“round”但更常见和正式的表达是“around”。因此改为“greenery around”。建议：在书面或正式英式/美式英语中使用“around”表示“周围”，避免口语缩略形式“round”。