Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid fillers (uh) and incorrect phrases like 'No 10 type'. Use correct tense and articles.

例: No, there are no tall buildings near my home because I live in a rural area. Most houses here are one- or two-storey, so the skyline is low and open.

提案: Answer directly and give a clear reason with specific vocabulary. Replace vague phrases like 'not memorable thing' and 'a lot of specialty' with concrete explanations. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'however' correctly.

例: No, I usually don't photograph buildings because I prefer taking pictures of people and nature. However, I sometimes photograph a building if its architecture is unusual or historically important.

提案: Be precise and grammatically correct. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct phrases like 'newly open' and 'table brands'.

例: Yes. I would like to visit the newly opened AGM Mall in my district because it has many new clothing stores and well-known brands. For example, there are several outlets I want to shop at and a modern food court to try.

提案: Organize the answer: state your opinion, then give two clear, specific reasons with linking words. Fix vocabulary errors ('use tears' -> 'use stairs') and be concise. Use examples to support points.

例: I wouldn't like to live in a tall building. First, getting in and out can be inconvenient if the elevator is crowded or breaks down, especially from the 7th floor. Second, tall buildings can feel noisy and busy, which would make me feel exhausted after a long day.

× Actually there are No 10 type of tall building near my home because I'm living in a rural area so that's why uh near my home there are only a single or first floor buildings.

✓ There are no high-rise buildings near my home because I live in a rural area, so there are only single- or two-story houses nearby.

The original mixes singular/plural forms and uses incorrect count expressions. 'No 10 type of tall building' is ungrammatical; use 'no high-rise buildings' (plural) to match 'there are'. 'I'm living' is an unusual continuous form for a permanent situation; use simple present 'I live'. 'single or first floor buildings' is unclear; use 'single- or two-story houses'. Suggestions: use plural nouns to match 'there are', prefer simple present for habitual or permanent facts, and choose standard terms ('high-rise', 'two-story').

× Oh, no, I don't like taking pictures of building because, uh, for me it is not memorable thing.

✓ Oh no, I don't like taking pictures of buildings because, for me, it is not a memorable thing.

The noun 'building' needs plural 'buildings' after 'pictures of'. This error involves noun form rather than -ing, but fits the given list as the gerund 'taking' is correct; primary issue is pluralization. Also add article 'a' before 'memorable thing' and commas for clarity. Suggestion: use plural when speaking generally ('pictures of buildings') and include articles with countable nouns ('a memorable thing').

× Uh, from my perspective, uh, although buildings have a lot of specialty, it is their architect was so good.

✓ From my perspective, although many buildings have special features, their architecture is very good.

The original has pronoun and word-choice problems: 'it is their architect was so good' is ungrammatical and mixes pronouns. Replace with 'their architecture is very good' to match the intended meaning. Also 'specialty' is the wrong noun; use 'special features' or 'distinctive features'. Suggestion: keep subject and verb consistent and choose correct nouns ('architecture' vs 'architect').

× So that's it.

✓ That's all.

'So that's it' is colloquial but not incorrect grammatically; however 'That's all' is clearer as a closing remark. The requested list focuses on grammatical categories; this is stylistic. Suggestion: prefer clearer closing phrases in tests.

× Yes, there is a newly open AGM mall in my district.

✓ Yes, there is a newly opened AGM mall in my district.

Use the past participle 'opened' after 'newly' to form the correct adjective 'newly opened'. 'There is' is correct for existence. Suggestion: use 'newly opened' to describe recent openings.

× So, uh, in that building I like to visit because there are a lot of new outlets of clothing and uh, table brands are open, so I like to visit in that building.

✓ I would like to visit that mall because there are many new clothing outlets and several tableware brands have opened there.

Problems: redundant prepositions ('in that building... visit in that building'), incorrect phrase 'outlets of clothing' (use 'clothing outlets'), and 'table brands' is unclear—likely 'tableware brands' or 'furniture brands'. Also use 'have opened' to show recent openings. Suggestion: avoid repeating location prepositions, use natural noun phrases ('clothing outlets'), and use present perfect for recent events ('have opened').

× Personally, I do not like to live in a tall building.

✓ Personally, I do not like living in tall buildings.

Original is understandable but slightly awkward: 'to live in a tall building' is grammatical but inconsistent with general preference; use gerund 'living' and plural 'tall buildings' for a general statement. Suggestion: use 'like + -ing' for preferences and plural when speaking generally.

× There are a lot of reasons.

✓ There are many reasons for that.

Add 'for that' to link reasons to the previous statement; 'a lot of reasons' is informal—'many reasons' is more appropriate. Suggestion: connect sentences to show cause-effect clearly.

× First, uh, you don't know which is your floor example, you live on 7th floor, so you go through by lift or use tears.

✓ First, you may not know which floor is yours; for example, if you live on the seventh floor, you have to use the elevator or the stairs.

Multiple pronoun and word errors: 'which is your floor' should be 'which floor is yours'; 'you live on 7th floor' needs article and ordinal formatting 'the seventh floor'; 'go through by lift or use tears' contains wrong preposition and 'tears' is wrong word—should be 'use the lift or the stairs'. Suggestion: use clear clauses, correct order for questions/relative clauses, include articles ('the seventh floor'), and choose correct words ('lift'/'elevator', 'stairs').

× There are a lot of hectic schedule and you're exhausted by that.

✓ There is a hectic schedule and you're exhausted by it.

Subject-verb agreement and count issues: 'There are a lot of hectic schedule' is wrong; 'schedule' is singular so use 'there is a hectic schedule' or pluralize to 'hectic schedules'. Also use pronoun 'it' rather than 'that' for clarity. Suggestion: match verb number to noun number and use appropriate pronouns ('it').

× So I don't like to live in the tall building.

✓ So I don't like living in tall buildings.

Repeat of earlier point: use plural 'tall buildings' for a general dislike and prefer gerund 'living' after 'don't like'. Suggestion: use general plural nouns for habitual statements and 'like + -ing' for preferences.