Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Відповідь є занадто короткою й загальною. Додайте конкретику: скільки будівель, наскільки вони високі, де саме розташовані, та використайте зв’язку для плавності (наприклад, "and" або "which"). Також уникайте односкладових відповідей — почніть з тематичного речення, потім додайте деталі.

例: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home, mainly a cluster of apartment towers about 15–20 storeys high. They stand along the main road, which makes the area feel quite urban and busy.

提案: Відповідь повторює ту саму фразу і не пояснює причину. Дайте коротку тему і потім одну-дві підтримуючі деталі з причиною або прикладом, використовуючи зв’язки (наприклад, "because", "but", "however").

例: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings because I prefer photographing people and nature. However, I might take a picture if a building has unusual architecture or colourful decorations.

提案: Фраза граматично некоректна й нечітка. Почніть з прямого речення відповіді (Yes/No) і потім поясніть причину або наведете приклад будівлі, яку не цікавитесь, або навпаки — одну, яку б хотіли відвідати. Використовуйте зв’язки (наприклад, "because", "for example").

例: No, there isn't any particular building I want to visit because I’m not very interested in architecture. For example, I prefer visiting parks or museums rather than famous skyscrapers.

提案: Відповідь містить помилки лексично й граматично, а також нечітко висловлює думку. Почніть із чіткої тематичної відповіді (Yes/No), потім поясніть, чому, з конкретними причинами або прикладами, використовуючи зв’язки (наприклад, "because", "so"). Перевірте вживання слів (не "stall" — можливо, "tall" або "small") і часів.

例: No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I currently live in one and I didn't enjoy it. For instance, I found it noisy and inconvenient to use the lifts during busy hours.

× No reason it isn't any buildings that I want to visit.

✓ There isn't any building that I want to visit.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'it isn't any buildings' which mixes dummy 'it' with plural 'buildings' and wrong word order. Use 'There isn't any building' to correctly express nonexistence. Suggestion: use 'There isn't' + singular noun or 'There aren't any buildings' + plural, e.g. 'There aren't any buildings I want to visit.'

× I'm now living in stall building so I never want to do it again.

✓ I am currently living in a tall building, so I never want to live in one again.

Errors: 'now' plus present continuous is acceptable but 'stall' is a misspelling of 'tall' and 'do it again' is vague and ungrammatical for living. Use 'currently' or 'now', correct adjective 'tall', and 'live in one again' to refer back to 'building'. Also change 'never want' to 'do not want' or keep 'never want' for strong refusal. Suggestion: 'I am currently living in a tall building, so I never want to live in one again.'

× No, I don't take photos of the buildings.

✓ No, I don't take photos of buildings.

Using the definite article 'the' implies specific buildings already known; the question is general. Remove 'the' to talk about buildings in general. Suggestion: use 'photos of buildings' for general habits.

× Yes, there are.

✓ Yes, there are tall buildings near my home.

While 'Yes, there are.' is grammatically acceptable as a short answer, it is elliptical. To be clear and match the question, include the noun phrase: 'Yes, there are tall buildings near my home.' This avoids ambiguity about what 'there are' refers to.