Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is grammatically correct and direct, but it's short and lacks elaboration. To improve, add one or two specific details (e.g., what kind of buildings are nearby, or why there are no tall buildings) and use a linking word to connect ideas. Keep the response natural and under five sentences.

例: No, there are no tall buildings near my home. Instead, the area mostly has two- or three-storey houses and small shops, so the neighbourhood feels quiet and residential.

提案: The reply is clear but overly brief and repetitive in structure. Improve by explaining a reason and giving an example of when you might take a building photo, using a linking word to connect the reason and the example.

例: I don't usually take photos of buildings because I'm more interested in nature photography; however, I sometimes photograph interesting architecture when I travel, such as historic churches or modern museums.

提案: Good direct answer with a clear preference. To raise the score, add a specific reason and a detail (e.g., what you want to see or do there) and link the ideas briefly. This will make your answer more informative and natural.

例: I would like to visit the Empire State Building because I've always wanted to see the panoramic view from its observation deck, and I'm also interested in its Art Deco architecture and history.

提案: The answer is clear but minimal. Improve by giving a concise reason and perhaps a brief comparison to living in a house, using a linking word to present the reason smoothly.

例: No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I prefer having a garden and more outdoor space, whereas high-rise apartments tend to feel more cramped and less private.

× No, there are no tall buildings near my home.

✓ No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home.

Use of 'no' with 'are' is acceptable but conversationally 'there aren't any' is more natural; however this is style not required by the provided error list. No grammatical error matching the specified problem types detected.

× I do not take photos of buildings.

✓ I don't take photos of buildings.

The original sentence is grammatically correct. Contraction 'don't' is more natural in speech but not required. No grammatical error matching the specified problem types detected.

× I would like to visit the Empire State Building.

✓ I would like to visit the Empire State Building.

This sentence is grammatically correct and fits the question. No grammatical error matching the specified problem types detected.

× No, I don't want to live in a tall building.

✓ No, I don't want to live in a tall building.

This sentence is grammatically correct and appropriate. No grammatical error matching the specified problem types detected.