Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更直接并注意语法与词序，用一到两句清楚说明位置与对比，避免无关的表情词。举例说明“乡村更好”的具体原因以增强内容。

例: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home because I live in the countryside. I prefer it that way because we have more green space and quieter streets compared with the noisy city parks.

提案: 回答要用正确时态与完整句子说明习惯与原因，并用清晰具体的理由（如构图、历史价值）来支持观点，避免模糊表达。

例: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because architecture can broaden my perspective. For example, photographing old buildings helps me appreciate their details and historical significance.

提案: 回答要先说出具体建筑名称，再给出1-2个具体理由并用连接词使句子流畅。注意语法与限定词（a/the）。

例: Yes, I would like to visit the Canton Tower in Guangzhou because it is one of the tallest landmarks in China and offers panoramic views of the city. I am also interested in its modern design and the observation deck.

提案: 回答要先明确立场，然后用具体原因支持（如便利设施、安全、交通），并结合个人情况说明影响。注意单复数与连贯连接词。

例: Yes, I think living in a tall building could be convenient for my family because it is usually close to shops and public transport. Since I live with my grandparents, having nearby supermarkets and parks would make daily life easier for them.

× No, they aren't any tall building near my home because I live in countryside, but the countryside screen is better than cities such as the park. Smile.

✓ No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home because I live in the countryside, but the countryside scenery is better than in the city — for example, the parks.

存在可数名词单复数和冠词错误：1) 'building' 应为复数 'buildings' 与 'any' 连用；2) 前面缺少定冠词或不定冠词，正确用法是 'the countryside'；3) 'screen' 用词错误，正确为 'scenery'；4) 'cities such as the park' 结构不通顺，改为 'in the city — for example, the parks'。建议：注意可数名词单复数形式，跟随量词（如 'any'）使用复数；熟悉固定搭配 'the countryside' 和正确词汇 'scenery'。

× Yes, I did because I think of a photo of building is broaden our view and I think this behavior is. It's help us value the screen.

✓ Yes, I did because I think a photo of a building broadens our view and this behavior helps us appreciate the scenery.

主要时态与动词形式错误：1) 'think of a photo of building is broaden' 不合语法，应该用一般现在时表达普遍事实并使动词与主语一致：'a photo ... broadens'；2) 'this behavior is. It's help' 断句不完整，动词需加 -s：'helps'；3) 'value the screen' 词汇和搭配错误，改为 'appreciate the scenery'。建议：陈述普遍事实用一般现在时，注意主谓一致（第三人称单数加 -s），使用正确词汇搭配。

× Yes, the Guangzhou tour, I look forward to visit because it's it is one of the tall buildings in the China. Many people look forward to visit it.

✓ Yes, the Canton Tower in Guangzhou — I look forward to visiting it because it is one of the tallest buildings in China. Many people look forward to visiting it.

动词形式与冠词、比较结构错误：1) 'look forward to visit' 后面应接动名词 'visiting'；2) 'it's it is' 冗余，应为 'it is'；3) 'one of the tall buildings in the China' 应为最高级比较 'one of the tallest buildings in China'，并且 'China' 前无冠词。建议：'look forward to' 后用动名词，表达“......之一”时使用 'one of the + 复数最高级' 结构；注意不要重复短语。

× Well, it is a good idea. I live with my grandmother and grandfathers. They usually go to park or supermarket. The tall buildings are convenient for them.

✓ Well, it is a good idea. I live with my grandmother and grandfather. They usually go to the park or the supermarket. Tall buildings are convenient for them.

存在名词单复数、冠词使用及词形错误：1) 'grandfathers' 若指只有一位应为 'grandfather'；2) 'go to park or supermarket' 前应加定冠词 'the'：'the park'、'the supermarket'；3) 'The tall buildings are convenient for them.' 开头的定冠词可省略或保留，保持一致性为 'Tall buildings are convenient for them.' 建议：明确是否指一位或多位祖父，注意可数名词前加冠词。