Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur. Gunakan kalimat topik yang jelas, lalu tambahkan detail spesifik dengan kata penghubung. Hindari pengulangan kata 'many' berturut-turut dan perbaiki bentuk jamak/arti (mis. 'an apartment and hotels' salah).

例: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, there are a few modern apartment complexes and a large hotel about two blocks away, which makes the area feel quite urban.

提案: Perbaiki grammar (use 'it's' or 'they are') dan perluas jawaban dengan alasan singkat serta kata penghubung untuk kelancaran. Buat jawaban lebih alami dan langsung.

例: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings because I find them less interesting than people or nature. However, I sometimes photograph architecture when I travel if the design is unusual.

提案: Jawaban tidak jelas dan tata bahasa rusak. Berikan topik sentence yang jelas (I wouldn't like to visit any), lalu jelaskan alasan spesifik dengan contoh. Gunakan linking words untuk koherensi.

例: I wouldn't choose a specific building to visit because I'm more interested in parks and markets. If I had to pick one, though, I'd visit a famous museum building for its exhibitions and architecture.

提案: Kalimat tidak jelas dan banyak kesalahan tata bahasa. Jawab langsung dengan topik sentence lalu jelaskan alasan konkret (mis. prefer garden, quiet, space) menggunakan kata penghubung seperti 'because' atau 'so'.

例: No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I prefer a house with a garden. I enjoy having more outdoor space and living near parks, which feels quieter and more relaxing.

× There are many apartment and hotels.

✓ There are many apartments and hotels.

ID 1: The noun 'apartment' is singular while the verb 'are' and 'many' require a plural noun. Make 'apartment' plural to match 'many' and the plural verb and noun list. Suggestion: use plural nouns when referring to multiple items (apartments).

× No, I don't take photos of buildings because that not important for me.

✓ No, I don't take photos of buildings because that is not important to me.

ID 17: The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'is' after 'that' to form the predicate. Also use the preposition 'to' in the phrase 'important to me'. Suggestion: include the correct form of the verb 'to be' and use 'important to me' for natural English.

× No, I don't like. Visit to visit is building.

✓ No, I don't. I don't want to visit any building.

ID 26: The original reply is fragmented and ungrammatical. Combine ideas into coherent sentences and use proper verb forms: 'I don't want to visit any building' expresses refusal/ lack of interest. Suggestion: form complete sentences and place verbs and objects in the correct order.

× I don't want to live in a tall building I love live in. Turn at a house in many parks, around parks and home.

✓ I don't want to live in a tall building. I would love to live in a house near many parks, with parks all around my home.

ID 26: This response is run-on and contains word order and missing auxiliary issues. Use a modal 'would' to express preference politely ('I would love to live'), ensure verbs are complete ('live in a house'), and reorder phrases for clarity ('near many parks', 'with parks all around my home'). Suggestion: split into two sentences, use proper modal verbs and natural prepositional phrases.