Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 用词和句子结构需要更自然、准确；注意语法（比如 course → of course; seats along the river → sits/stands along the river）和逻辑连贯。回答应先直接回答问题，然后用1–2个简短具体细节支持。避免冗长或不必要的信息。

例: Yes, there is a tall tower near my home. It stands along the river and is used to transmit television signals. Because it is very high, it is one of the most impressive landmarks in my hometown.

提案: 词汇和表达不准确（instinctive → distinctive/interesting; grammar 时态和冠词错误），句子冗长且有重复。应先简短回答，然后用一两个清晰具体的原因或例子支持，注意时态一致和句子简洁。

例: It depends. I usually photograph buildings that have distinctive or interesting designs, because I want to remember their details. If a building looks ordinary, I usually don't take a picture to avoid filling up my phone storage.

提案: 句子中有语法和搭配错误（started in Beijing → stayed/lived in Beijing; didn't have a time → haven't had time; empirical structure and historic → imperial architecture and history）。回答应直接、准确并给出具体原因。使用连接词如 'because' 或 'so' 保持连贯。

例: Yes, I would like to visit the Palace Museum. Although I have lived in Beijing for three years, I haven't had time to go because tickets are often sold out on weekends. I want to see its imperial architecture and learn more about its long history.

提案: 表达清晰但有语法和用词错误（afraid of heights 正确；I didn't want to wait → I wouldn't want to wait；prefer not to living → prefer not to live）。回答可以更简洁并用一到两个原因支持，注意时态和条件句的正确形式。

例: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building. I'm afraid of heights, so living high up would make me feel uncomfortable, and I wouldn't want to spend a long time waiting for the elevator every day.

× Course there is a tall tower near my home.

✓ Of course there is a tall tower near my home.

原句中使用了 "Course"，应为固定短语 "Of course"。这是代词/词组使用错误，需使用完整短语表达肯定。建议记住常用固定表达 "of course" 用于表示“当然”。

× It is used to transmit television signals and seats along the river and as it is very high so it is one of the most impressive buildings in my hometown.

✓ It is used to transmit television signals and sits along the river. Because it is very high, it is one of the most impressive buildings in my hometown.

原句中使用了错误的动词形式 "seats"（坐）应为 "sits"（位于），属于介词/动词搭配错误使句意混乱；另外句子连接词混用（and ... and as ... so）造成结构问题。建议把两部分拆成独立句，用 because 引导原因，并用正确动词 "sits" 描述位置。

× If the architecture has some instinctive features, I like to take a photo to remember it as I found architecture is very interesting.

✓ If the architecture has some distinctive features, I like to take a photo to remember it, as I find architecture very interesting.

原句中多处问题："instinctive" 用错，应为 "distinctive"（独特的）；时态与主语不一致，"found" 应为一般现在时 "find" 因为表达习惯性或普遍事实；这涉及动词形式选择（-ing 形式并非关键），需用一般现在时。建议用常态动词时态表示个人爱好和看法。

× However, if it is only a ordinary one, I didn't want to take a take a photo to save space on my.

✓ However, if it is only an ordinary one, I don't want to take a photo to save space on my phone.

原句错误包括冠词使用（"a ordinary" 应为 "an ordinary"），时态不一致（描述现在习惯应使用一般现在时 "don't want" 而不是过去式 "didn't want"），重复短语 "take a take a"，以及句尾缺少名词（"on my" 应为 "on my phone"）。建议注意元音开头单词用 an，描述习惯用一般现在时，并检查重复和残缺成分。

× Course, I would like to visit the Palace Museum.

✓ Of course, I would like to visit the Palace Museum.

同样是固定搭配错误，"Course" 应为 "Of course"。建议记住完整短语 "Of course" 表示肯定回答。

× Although I have started in Beijing for three years, I didn't have a time to go there because the tickets are always sold out at weekends.

✓ Although I have been in Beijing for three years, I haven't had time to go there because the tickets are always sold out on weekends.

原句中时态与介词使用错误："have started in Beijing for three years" 应为现在完成进行/状态 "have been in Beijing for three years" 表示持续时间；"didn't have a time" 应为现在完成时 "haven't had time"（到现在仍未去过）；此外介词应为 "on weekends"。建议掌握表示持续时间的现在完成时结构 and 正确介词搭配。

× I would like to go there to enjoy the empirical structure and historic.

✓ I would like to go there to enjoy the imperial architecture and history.

原句中词语使用不当："empirical" 意为经验的、实证的，非想表达的“故宫的/皇家的”；"structure" 可用 "architecture" 更合适；"historic" 用作形容词但语义不完整，应改为名词 "history" 或形容词短语 "historic buildings"。建议选词要符合语义，常见搭配如 "imperial architecture"、"history"。

× If I live in the tall building, that may make me feel very uncomfortable, and I didn't want to wait the elevator every day for a long time, so I prefer not to living in the tall building.

✓ If I lived in a tall building, that might make me feel very uncomfortable, and I wouldn't want to wait for the elevator every day for a long time, so I prefer not to live in a tall building.

原句存在情态动词和动词形式错误：条件句与结果应使用与现实相反的虚拟语气，故 "If I lived..." 替代 "If I live..."；"may" 改为更合适的情态动词 "might"；"didn't want" 改为虚拟条件的 "wouldn't want"；动词不定式误用 "to living" 应为 "to live"；此外缺少介词 "wait for the elevator"。建议学习第一/二条件句与情态动词用法及不定式形式。