Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更直接并注意句子结构与语法。避免重复口头语（如“uh”）并使用更自然的连接词。可以先给出明确的主题句，然后用一两句具体原因或例子支持。注意冠词和动词形式（如“there aren't”而不是“there's not”），以及“elderly people”替代“old people”。

例: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home. I live in the city centre where many elderly people live, so local planners try to keep buildings low for convenience and to preserve the area's character.

提案: 句子要更简洁、语法正确，并减少犹豫词。用恰当的时态和代词（例如“I usually don't”而非“I usually not”），并使用流利的连接词（e.g. “but if”）引出条件。描述时用准确词汇如“well-designed”或“creative design”。

例: I don't usually take photos of buildings, but if a building has a well-designed or very creative façade, I'll take a picture of it to remember the details.

提案: 回答应更具体且语法准确。给出一个明确的例子（如某座古建筑或城市）并说明原因，使用自然连词。避免重复“uh”和不当词组（如“a historic”应为“history”或“historical”）。

例: I'd like to visit ancient buildings in many cities, especially old temples and museums, because they are rich in history and can tell us a lot about the past.

提案: 回答要更流畅且语法正确。直接给出观点并用一两条具体原因支持。改正表达错误（如“six-storey building”或“six floors”，“convenient to go up and down”改为“convenient to go up and down stairs”或“more accessible”）。避免重复和犹豫语气。

例: No, I don't want to live in a tall building. I currently live in a six-storey building and prefer low-rise housing because it's more convenient and accessible for daily comings and goings.

× No, there's not.

✓ No, there aren't any.

原句中使用了 'there's not'（there is not）与复数或不可数名词搭配不当。考生想表达“没有（高楼）”，应使用 there aren't any 或 simply No, there aren't，用于复数名词。建议根据所指对象选择 there isn't（单数/不可数）或 there aren't/there aren't any（复数）。

× Because I live in the center of the city, There's always some, uh, old people live there.

✓ Because I live in the center of the city, there are always some old people living there.

句子存在主谓一致和从句结构问题。'There's' 是 there is（单数），但后面接的是复数 some old people，应改为 'there are'。此外 'old people live there' 在此处作状语从句更自然应使用现在分词或定语从句 'living there'。建议注意 there is/there are 的单复数一致，并用适当的非限定性结构使句子更流畅。

× So for the convenience and the, uh, humanities, they will not build some very high buildings.

✓ So for convenience and for cultural reasons, they won't build very high buildings.

原句中 'for the convenience and the humanities' 介词与名词搭配不当且用词不准。应使用 'for convenience'（为方便）和 'for cultural reasons'（出于文化/人文原因）。此外 'they will not build some very high buildings' 中 'some' 不合适，改为 'very high buildings' 或 'any very high buildings'。建议学习固定搭配如 'for convenience', 'for cultural reasons'，并注意否定句中 'any' 的使用。

× I usually not, but uh, if there's some buildings that is very, uh, designed well and the it's very creative on their appearance, I will take a photo about it.

✓ I usually don't, but if there are some buildings that are very well designed and very creative in their appearance, I will take a photo of them.

句中 'I usually not' 缺少助动词，正确为 'I usually don't'。'if there's some buildings' 有主谓不一致，应为 'if there are some buildings'。'that is very... designed' 对 buildings 应用复数动词 'are'，且 'designed well' 更自然为 'well designed'。'the it's' 多余且有语法错误。'take a photo about it' 不地道，应为 'take a photo of them'。建议复习否定形式（do/does not）、there is/are 的一致，以及固定搭配 'well designed' 和 'photo of'。

× I'd like to visit the ancient building of, uh, many cities because it's, uh, full of a historic and, uh, it can record some things at the past.

✓ I'd like to visit the ancient buildings in many cities because they're full of history and can record things from the past.

原句有时态和名词使用不当：'ancient building of many cities' 更自然为复数 'ancient buildings in many cities'；'it's full of a historic' 用词错误，应该 'they're full of history' 或 'full of historical value'。'record some things at the past' 中 'at the past' 是错误搭配，应为 'from the past'。建议学习常见搭配如 'full of history'、'from the past'，并注意单复数与代词一致。

× No, uh, the day the, the building I live in is just have, uh, six layers, so it is not that tall.

✓ No. The building I live in only has six floors, so it is not that tall.

句中 'the day the, the' 是口误应删除；'is just have six layers' 为语法错误，英语中应用 'has' 表示所有关系，且建筑楼层通常用 'floors' 而不是 'layers'。'just' 放错位置，建议用 'only has six floors'。此外 'No, uh,' 可简化为 'No.'。建议复习动词 have 的用法以及常用词 'floor'。

× I prefer to live in a short building because it is more convenient for me to up and down.

✓ I prefer to live in a low-rise building because it is more convenient for me to go up and down.

原句 'short building' 虽可理解但不自然，英语中描述楼层少用 'low-rise building' 或 'a short building' 可替换为 'low-rise'。'to up and down' 缺少动词，应为 'to go up and down'。建议注意副词/动词位置，使用完整动词短语 'go up and down' 来表示上下楼。