Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện sự rõ ràng và ngữ pháp: tránh tiếng ừ, các âm tiết không rõ ràng và sửa lỗi số từ. Nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Ví dụ: nêu chính xác chiều cao/ số tầng, vị trí và lý do bạn nghĩ nó cao. Tập nói mạch lạc, dùng cấu trúc câu đơn giản nếu cần.

例: Yes, there are some tall buildings near my home. For example, there is a five-storey building that houses two restaurants on the ground floor, and it is the tallest building in my town, located next to the main market.

提案: Cải thiện ngữ pháp động từ và dùng linking words để rõ ràng: chỉnh thì (don’t/doesn’t), dạng V-ing, và liên kết ý bằng từ như ‘instead’ hoặc ‘rather than’. Thêm một lý do cụ thể hoặc ví dụ để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

例: Not really. I don’t often take photos of buildings because I prefer exploring them inside rather than just standing outside and photographing them. For instance, when I visit a historical church I focus on the interior details and layout.

提案: Giảm sự lặp và dùng cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác: tránh ‘wish I would’ khi nói về ước mơ; dùng ‘I would like to’ hoặc ‘I’ve always wanted to’. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể (tên tòa nhà, lý do) và dùng linking words như ‘because’ để giải thích động cơ.

例: Yes, I would love to visit the tallest buildings in the UAE, especially the Burj Khalifa, because I have always been fascinated by modern architecture and I want to see the view from the observation deck.

提案: Cải thiện cấu trúc câu và diễn đạt lý do rõ ràng: tránh các mẩu từ thừa và sửa lỗi động từ (e.g. ‘I often have to go up and down’). Nên nêu rõ lợi và hại, dùng linking words như ‘because’ và ‘so’ để làm luận điểm mạch lạc. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể (thang máy, sự tiện lợi).

例: Not really. I wouldn’t like to live in a very tall building because I would have to go up and down frequently and I might rely on elevators, which can be inconvenient. I prefer a small house with one or two storeys because it feels more convenient and homely.

× Uh, near my home there's UH-2 restaurants.

✓ Uh, near my home there are two restaurants.

The verb 'there's' is a contraction of 'there is' which requires a singular noun. 'Restaurants' is plural, so use 'there are'. Also 'UH-2' should be 'two'. Suggestion: use 'there are' with plural nouns and write numbers as words in speech transcripts when appropriate.

× It says uh, it is A5 story building and I think this is a tallest building around in my town.

✓ It is a five-story building and I think this is the tallest building in my town.

Use 'five-story' as a compound adjective before the noun. 'A5' is incorrect; write 'five-story'. Use the definite article 'the' with 'tallest' because superlatives require 'the'. Also 'around in my town' is redundant; use 'in my town'. Suggestion: use 'the' with superlatives and form compound adjectives correctly.

× Not really, I don't like take photos much so I don't often takes photos of buildings.

✓ Not really, I don't like taking photos much so I don't often take photos of buildings.

After 'like' we need the -ing form: 'like taking'. Also after auxiliary 'do' the main verb is base form: 'do not often take'. 'Takes' is third-person singular, but the subject is 'I', so use 'take'. Suggestion: after 'like' use gerund; use base verb after 'do/does'.

× When I arrived to a building I often go inside and explore it instead of staying.

✓ When I arrive at a building I often go inside and explore it instead of staying outside.

Use present tense 'arrive' for habitual actions. The correct preposition is 'arrive at' (or 'arrive in' for larger places). Also 'instead of staying' is incomplete; add 'outside' to clarify contrast. Suggestion: use 'arrive at' and ensure contrast phrases are complete.

× If I have a chance, I wish I would uh, go to the highest buildings in the world in UAE.

✓ If I have a chance, I would like to go to the tallest buildings in the UAE.

Use 'would like to' for polite wishes about future opportunities. 'Wish I would go' is unnatural here. Use 'tallest' rather than 'highest' for buildings and include article 'the' with country abbreviation: 'the UAE'. Suggestion: use 'would like to' for desires and 'the' with country names that require it.

× Uh, and this is my dream when I was a child.

✓ Uh, and this was my dream when I was a child.

Maintain past tense consistency: 'was' matches 'when I was a child'. Using present 'is' with past time phrase is inconsistent. Suggestion: use past tense for past time references.

× And for me, not really, because if I live in a tall building I often to go up and down more slowly, unlike the house with, uh, one or two stories I often feel.

✓ For me, not really, because if I lived in a tall building I would have to go up and down more often, unlike living in a one- or two-story house.

Conditionals require second conditional: 'If I lived... I would...'. 'Often to go up and down more slowly' is ungrammatical; use 'have to go up and down more often'. Also clarify comparison: 'unlike living in a one- or two-story house'. Suggestion: use correct conditional forms and clearer comparative phrases.