Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và dùng ngữ pháp đúng. Tránh lỗi chính tả và từ không phù hợp (ví dụ: "skycropper" -> "skyscrapers"). Thêm một câu ngắn giải thích cụ thể (ví dụ vị trí hoặc loại tòa nhà) và dùng liên từ phù hợp như "because" hoặc "so" để câu rõ ràng hơn.

例: Yes. There are many tall buildings near my home because the area has become very urbanized. For example, I can see several office towers and modern apartment blocks along the main road, which were built in the last few years.

提案: Cần trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn, tránh câu rời rạc và các cụm từ không đúng ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "or feelings", "Limit interest"). Dùng liên từ để nối lý do ("because", "so") và cung cấp một ví dụ cụ thể hoặc thói quen thay thế.

例: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings because the area is always crowded and busy. For instance, when I walk past the city center I rarely stop to take pictures; instead I prefer to take photos of nature during my free time.

提案: Cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và trật tự từ, dùng tên đúng ("Landmark 81") và nối các ý mạch lạc hơn. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về lý do (kiến trúc, tầm nhìn, nhà hàng) và dùng thì phù hợp trong câu điều kiện ("If I have the opportunity" hoặc "If I get the chance").

例: Yes. I would like to visit Landmark 81 because it is a very impressive and tall skyscraper. I have heard the observation deck offers great city views, and there are several high-quality restaurants there, so if I get the chance I would go to Ho Chi Minh City to experience it.

提案: Cần dùng thì và đại từ phù hợp ("I would like to live" hoặc "I want to live"). Sửa lỗi từ vựng và cụm từ không chính xác (ví dụ: "lock heavy startup the stair" -> "climb the stairs"). Nên nêu 2-3 lợi ích cụ thể (tiện nghi, an toàn, view) và dùng liên từ để nối ý.

例: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it is convenient and modern. For example, elevators make it easy to reach my apartment, the building usually has good security, and I could enjoy a nice view of the city from the windows.

× Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home because life is becoming more urbanized and I can see many skycropper such as office building and urban area is cater to people life.

✓ Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home because life is becoming more urbanized and I can see many skyscrapers such as office buildings, and urban areas cater to people's lives.

The sentence uses incorrect singular/plural forms: 'skycropper' should be 'skyscrapers' (plural), 'office building' should be 'office buildings' (plural), 'urban area' should be 'urban areas' (plural), and 'people life' should be 'people's lives' (possessive plural). Use plural nouns when referring to multiple items and use the possessive form for 'people's lives'. Suggestions: check each noun that refers to multiple items and convert to plural; use possessive for 'people'.

× No, I don't take photos or feelings because it's always crowded and full of traffic so taking photo is almost impossible and I don't spend much time taking photos and it's not my hobby. Limit interest.

✓ No, I don't take photos or have such feelings because it's always crowded and full of traffic, so taking photos is almost impossible. I don't spend much time taking photos and it's not my hobby. I have limited interest.

Errors include incorrect verb/noun choice and -ing noun form: 'take photos or feelings' should be 'take photos or have such feelings'; 'taking photo' needs plural 'taking photos'; 'Limit interest' is incorrect word form—should be 'I have limited interest'. Use gerunds correctly (taking photos) and choose appropriate verbs/nouns. Suggestion: use 'taking photos' for the activity and 'limited interest' for the noun phrase.

× Yes, I would like to visit a building with Corey Landmark 81 because it very stunning and massive skyscraper.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit Landmark 81 because it is a very stunning and massive skyscraper.

Problems: unnecessary word 'Corey' and missing article 'a' before 'very stunning and massive skyscraper'; 'it very stunning' lacks verb 'is'. Use singular article 'a' for countable singular nouns and include the verb 'is'. Suggestion: remove extra words, add 'is a'.

× Especially I hear that the restaurant they are very expensive and tasty.

✓ I have heard that the restaurants there are very expensive but tasty.

Pronoun and agreement issue: 'the restaurant they are' incorrectly uses 'they' for 'restaurant'; better to pluralize 'restaurants' and use 'there' to indicate location; also add auxiliary 'have' for 'I have heard'. Suggestion: use 'restaurants there are' or 'the restaurant there is' with correct pronoun and number agreement.

× If I have opportunity, I will go Ho Chi Minh to experience it.

✓ If I have the opportunity, I will go to Ho Chi Minh City to experience it.

Missing article 'the' before 'opportunity', missing preposition 'to' before place, and 'Ho Chi Minh' should be 'Ho Chi Minh City'. Use 'will' correctly for future; add necessary articles and prepositions. Suggestion: include 'the' and 'to' and full place name.

× Yes, I went to live in your tall building because it's very convenient and modern.

✓ Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it's very convenient and modern.

Tense and modality error: 'I went to live' implies past action but context asks desire; use conditional/modal 'would like to' or present simple 'want to'. Also 'your tall building' is odd—use 'a tall building'. Suggestion: use 'would like to live in a tall building'.

× Thanks to the elevator I can get around quickly and I don't have to lock heavy startup the stair.

✓ Thanks to the elevator, I can get around quickly and I don't have to climb the heavy stairs.

Pronoun and word choice errors: 'lock heavy startup the stair' is nonsensical. Likely intended 'climb the heavy stairs'. Add comma after introductory clause. Use plural 'stairs' for steps. Suggestion: replace phrase with 'climb the stairs'.

× Moreover, it is safe and offer nice view city.

✓ Moreover, it is safe and offers a nice view of the city.

Subject-verb agreement and article/quantifier errors: 'offer' should be 'offers' to agree with 'it'; 'nice view city' needs article 'a' and preposition 'of'. Suggestion: use 'offers a nice view of the city'.