Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答需要更直接且语法正确。先用一句话回答问题，然后补充简要具体信息（如建筑名称、功能、位置）。注意时态和主谓一致，避免多余词和重复。

例: Yes, there are some tall structures near my home. For example, there is a bridge called Tangong Bridge which connects two towns and is quite prominent in the area.

提案: 需要用更自然的表达并给出具体原因或例子。先直接回答，然后说明什么时候和为什么拍照，使用正确的动词和名词（e.g. remember, design, scenery）。

例: Yes, I often take photos of buildings when I visit new places because I want to remember their design and the surrounding scenery.

提案: 回答要更流畅并使用准确的形容词。先直接说想去的建筑，然后说明原因并加上具体细节（例如夜景、观景台、体验）。避免使用不恰当或模糊的词语如“sudden”。

例: Yes, I would like to visit Taipei 101 because its observation deck offers spectacular night views of the city and the building itself is an impressive example of modern architecture.

提案: 回应该更简洁并提供清晰的原因。先表态，然后用一两句说明原因（如地震、担心安全或感到不舒服），语法上注意复数、时态和词序。避免重复相同意思的短语。

例: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building because Taiwan has frequent earthquakes and I would feel unsafe if the building swayed during a quake.

× Yes there have the tow bridge near my homes.

✓ Yes, there is the tow bridge near my home.

原句中代词和名词形式使用不当："there have" 非英语表达，应使用存在句 "there is"；"homes" 应为单数 "home" 来指代说话者的居住地。建议记住英语中存在句常用 "there is/there are"，并根据所指对象单复数选择单数或复数名词。

× His name is people calls is Tangong bridge and is connects the 10 tensions and Bally's town.

✓ People call it Tangong Bridge and it connects the two towns of Tensin and Bally's Town.

原句中代词和主语不一致："His name" 用于人称，但这里指桥，应使用 "it"；"people calls is" 语序和动词形式错误，正确为 "people call it"（人称复数主语用动词原形）；"is connects" 多余助动词，正确为 "it connects"。另外地名和数量拼写错误，"10 tensions" 应为 "two towns"（推测）或正确地名。建议用代词 it 指物，用复数主语时动词不用加 -s。

× For.

✓ (remove fragment)

原句仅为片段 'For.'，没有完整结构，可能是多余或断句错误。建议删除或补充完整句子以表达意图。

× When I have the trip with the new locations, I will take a photo of the buildings and to for a memorize this design and the beautiful service.

✓ When I go on a trip to new places, I take photos of the buildings to remember their designs and beautiful details.

原句时态和动词形式混乱："When I have the trip" 不自然，应使用一般现在表达习惯或将来时；"I will take" 与从属时间状语从句搭配通常用现在时表示习惯性动作；"and to for a memorize" 中不定式/介词混用且动词拼写错误，正确应为 "to remember" 或 "to memorize"。建议使用正确的动词短语和简洁结构。

× Oh yes, in Taiwan we have the tallest building called Taipei 101, and I think the top of the view at night is very sudden and I like to revisit it.

✓ Oh yes, in Taiwan we have the tall building called Taipei 101, and I think the view from the top at night is amazing and I would like to visit it again.

原句中时态和词汇使用不当："the top of the view" 应为 "the view from the top"；"is very sudden" 用词错误，应使用形容词如 "amazing" 或 "spectacular"；"I like to revisit it" 时态和用法可更自然为 "I would like to visit it again"。建议注意固定搭配（view from the top）和选择恰当形容词。

× Umm, I don't think so. I don't think I want to live in the tall building because Taiwan have the many earthquake and when it when earth will come, the tall building have the very shake shaking.

✓ Umm, I don't think so. I don't want to live in a tall building because Taiwan has many earthquakes, and when an earthquake happens, tall buildings shake a lot.

原句代词、动词和名词复数使用均有问题："Taiwan have" 应为第三人称单数 "Taiwan has"；"the many earthquake" 冠词和复数错误，应为 "many earthquakes"；"when it when earth will come" 语序和表达错误，应为 "when an earthquake happens" 或 "when the earth shakes"；"have the very shake shaking" 非英语表达，正确为 "shake a lot"。建议复习主谓一致、名词复数和自然表达地震发生的习惯用法。