Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答自然且信息充足，但可更精简并使用连接词提升连贯性；可增加一两处具体细节（例如最常去的店或常做的活动）以显示真实经历。注意把句子控制在五句以内，避免冗余。

例: Yes, there is a tall shopping mall about a 20-minute walk from my home. I often go there because it has a supermarket and several cafes, and I usually shop for groceries at the supermarket on weekends. Since it opened last year, it has made local shopping much more convenient.

提案: 回答清楚且相关，但可用更具体的例子或描述拍摄风格（如角度、时间、设备）以展示词汇和细节深度；使用连接词使句子更流畅。控制在五句内。

例: Yes, I enjoy photographing buildings, especially historical landmarks when I travel. I usually take wide-angle shots to capture the whole facade and close-ups of decorative details, then share my best photos with friends on WeChat.

提案: 回答有明确主题句和理由，但句子略显啰嗦并含有小语法问题（多余的“at”）。可修正错误并补充具体期待看到的展馆或文物，增强具体性和说服力。

例: I would like to visit the Palace Museum because it showcases magnificent traditional architecture and rich cultural history. I hope to see the imperial halls and ancient artifacts when I go during the next holiday.

提案: 回答直接且有具体原因和例子，结构良好。但可更加简洁并使用一两个连接词提高流畅性；如果能补充替代方案（例如喜欢的居住环境）会更完整。

例: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building because I'm afraid of heights and feel dizzy on high floors. I would prefer a low-rise apartment near a park so I can avoid elevators and enjoy a calm environment.

× Yes, there is a tall shopping mall near my home.

✓ Yes, there is a tall shopping mall near my home.

句子本身语法正确，结构为“There is + 名词短语”，用来表示近处存在某物，时态和单复数一致，无需改动。

× It's about a 20 minute walk and I often go there because it has a good variety of shops, including a supermarket and several cafes.

✓ It's about a 20-minute walk and I often go there because it has a good variety of shops, including a supermarket and several cafés.

需要在复合数量词作形容词时用连字符（20-minute），以保持表达清晰；‘cafes’拼写也可用带重音的形式café，但不是必须。此改动属标点/拼写规范，不改变句子时态或结构。

× It was built last year and has really improved local shopping convenience.

✓ It was built last year and has really improved local shopping convenience.

句子语法正确。使用过去时‘was built’描述建成时间，后半句用现在完成时强调至今的影响，时态搭配合理，无需改动。

× Yes, I enjoy taking photos in buildings.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking photos of buildings.

动词enjoy后应接动名词，原句中taking photos in buildings 表达上不自然，介词in不合适，正确应为 taking photos of buildings（拍摄建筑物）。因此修改介词以符合搭配。

× When I travel, I often photograph interesting architecture, especially historical landmarks, and then I share the photos with my friends on WeChat so they can see the places I've visited.

✓ When I travel, I often photograph interesting architecture, especially historical landmarks, and then I share the photos with my friends on WeChat so they can see the places I've visited.

句子语法正确，介词用法恰当（share...with），时态也一致，故无需改动。

× I would like to visit the Palace Museum because it's an important historical site at that showcases China's magnificent traditional architecture and rich cultural history.

✓ I would like to visit the Palace Museum because it's an important historical site that showcases China's magnificent traditional architecture and rich cultural history.

原句中多了一个多余的介词'at'（'site at that'不正确）。应删除'at'，使用关系代词that引导定语从句。此错误属于介词/句子结构层面，按清单归类为'Article errors'（列表中也包含与限定词相关错误），这里给出简明修正并说明原因。说明：去掉多余的'at'，使定语从句正确连接。

× I haven't managed to arrange a visit yet, but I hope to go during the next holiday.

✓ I haven't managed to arrange a visit yet, but I hope to go during the next holiday.

句子时态使用正确：现在完成时表示到目前为止未能安排，后半句用一般现在时表示希望，符合语法，故无需修改。

× No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because I'm afraid of heights.

✓ No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because I'm afraid of heights.

句中情态动词用法恰当，表明个人意愿，结构与时态正确，无需改动。

× I often feel dizzy and anxious when I'm high up, so living on a high floor would make everyday life uncomfortable.

✓ I often feel dizzy and anxious when I'm high up, so living on a high floor would make everyday life uncomfortable.

句子时态与从句逻辑一致，使用一般现在时描述习惯性感觉，条件句中使用would表推测或结果，语法正确，无需修改。

× For instance, I'd avoid standing near the windows or taking the elevator to the top floors.

✓ For instance, I'd avoid standing near the windows or taking the elevator to the top floors.

动词短语结构正确：avoid后接动名词standing/taking, 表达清晰，语法正确，无需改动。