Building— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are there tall buildings near your home?
受験者
Yeah, there is a shopping mall near my home. I often hang out with my friend there and there's a very big shopping mall on the second floor of the.
試験官
Do you take photos of buildings?
受験者
No, I don't think the buildings are very beautiful and. They are very special to take photo.
試験官
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
受験者
No, I don't often go outside, only if there are no food in my home, so I need to go to the shopping mall to buy some almost time. I always stay at home and even boring a common friend and.
試験官
Do you want to live in a tall building?
受験者
To be honest, I'm not living in the tall building which have about 24 floors. So umm, if I can choose, I don't want to live in the two tall building. I prefer to live in a house I think.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are there tall buildings near your home?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答要更直接、结构更清楚，并避免冗余与重复。可先给主句说明是否有高楼，然后用一两句具体细节（位置、用途或频率）支持。注意语法和句子完整性，避免断句或多余重复词。
例: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, a large shopping mall with multiple floors is just a five-minute walk away, and I often go there with friends to shop or watch movies.
Do you take photos of buildings?
スコア: 40.0提案: 答案要清晰表达观点并给出具体原因或例子。避免不完整句和矛盾表述（例如先说不漂亮又说很特别）。用连接词（because, so, however）使句子连贯。
例: Not really, because I don't find most buildings near me particularly attractive. However, if I see an unusual or historic building, I might take a photo to remember it.
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
スコア: 35.0提案: 回答应直接回应“是否想去参观某建筑”，然后解释原因。避免与主题无关的细节和语法混乱。使用连词说明频率和原因，并给出具体例子或替代选项。
例: Not really — I rarely go out except for necessities like shopping. If I did want to visit a building, it would probably be a nearby museum because I enjoy learning about local history.
Do you want to live in a tall building?
スコア: 50.0提案: 先明确回答“想不想住高楼”，然后给出具体理由（如噪音、空间、景观或方便性）。注意时态和数的搭配（singular/plural）与句子完整性，使用连接词使论述顺畅。
例: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building. I prefer a house because it usually offers more privacy, outdoor space and a quieter environment.
文法
× Yeah, there is a shopping mall near my home.
✓ Yes, there is a shopping mall near my home.
句首口語“Yeah”用於正式回答時可改為“Yes”。这里不是语法错误的核心，但为更自然和正式，建议使用“Yes”。（简体中文：在正式或半正式场合，使用“Yes”比“Yeah”更合适。）
× I often hang out with my friend there and there's a very big shopping mall on the second floor of the.
✓ I often hang out there with my friend, and there is a very big shopping mall on the second floor.
原句结尾有不完整片段“of the.”，造成句子结构不完整。应去掉多余片段并调整词序使句子通顺。（简体中文：去掉不完整的“of the.”，将“hang out with my friend there”改为更自然的“hang out there with my friend”，并用连词衔接。）
× No, I don't think the buildings are very beautiful and.
✓ No, I don't think the buildings are very beautiful.
句末有多余的连词“and.”导致句子未完成。删除“and.”使句子完整并保持一般现在时表达观点。（简体中文：删除多余的“and.”以完成句子。）
× They are very special to take photo.
✓ They are very special to photograph.
“to take photo”结构不自然且缺少冠词，常用动词短语应为“to take photos of”或更正式的“to photograph”。这里改为“to photograph”更简洁准确。（简体中文：把“to take photo”改为“to photograph”或“to take photos of + 对象”。）」},{
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