Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap net değil ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Öncelikle doğrudan cevap verin (Yes/No + kısa açıklama). Gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın ve daha tutarlı cümle yapıları kullanın. Bağlaçlarla nedenini kısa ve spesifik olarak açıklayın. Örneğin 'No, there aren’t many tall buildings because I live in a small town' şeklinde basit ve doğru bir yapı kullanın.

例: No, there aren’t many tall buildings near my home because I live in a small town. The area is mostly low-rise houses, so there aren’t any skyscrapers or large office towers nearby.

提案: Cevap karışık ve tekrarlı. Önce net bir yanıt verin (Yes/No + kısa açıklama), sonra kısa bir gerekçe ve örnek ekleyin. Duygu ve neden belirtilirken doğru kelimeleri kullanın ("impress me" yerine "affect me" değil, 'impress' ya da 'attract me'). Gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın.

例: I don’t usually take photos of buildings, but sometimes I do if a building impresses me. For example, I might photograph an old cathedral because of its beautiful architecture.

提案: Cevapta fikir var ama tekrarlamalar ve dilbilgisi hataları bulunuyor. Önce tek bir net cümleyle binayı belirtin, sonra kısa nedenler verin. Sayı belirtirseniz ("five") nedenlerini kısaca sıralayın. Daha doğal ifadeler kullanın: 'I'd like to visit the Burj Khalifa because it's the tallest building and offers great views.'

例: I would really like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is the tallest building in the world and offers amazing views from the observation deck. Also, many people visit to enjoy the architecture and take photos.

提案: Cevapta fikir açık ama anlatım düzensiz ve dilbilgisi hatalı. Net bir başlangıç cümlesi kurun ('Yes, I would like to live in a tall building') ve ardından iki kısa gerekçe verin. Soyut ifadeler yerine spesifik faydalar söyleyin (örneğin 'good views', 'convenient location', 'modern facilities').

例: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it usually offers great views and is located near shops and public transport. Living in a high-rise can also feel lively and inspiring for my studies or work.

× Actually there are no not too much because my town is my home is in a small town and this is not a huge city, so we don't have too much nearby in our house.

✓ Actually there are not many tall buildings near my home because I live in a small town, not a huge city, so we don't have many nearby.

The original sentence has double negation and incorrect quantifier use ('no not too much') and redundant phrases ('my town is my home is'). Use 'not many' for countable plural nouns (tall buildings). Also simplify and reorder to follow natural English sentence structure: subject + verb + complement. Improve by practicing countable vs uncountable quantifiers and removing redundant clauses.

× Actually it depends on the building because some buildings are effect on me and gives me take photos, energy and. I, I don't really, but I don't really take like to take photos of buildings.

✓ Actually it depends on the building because some buildings affect me and make me want to take photos. I don't really like to take photos of buildings.

Errors include wrong verb choice and form ('are effect on me' should be 'affect me'), subject-verb agreement ('gives me' with plural subject), and incorrect phrase 'gives me take photos'. Use 'make me want to' to express causing a desire. Also remove hesitation and repeated words. Practice verb patterns: 'affect' (verb) and 'make someone want to'.

× Actually I have 5, For instance, Burj Khalifa, which is the highest building in the world. I really like to visit there because it's as I said, it's really high and high building and many peoples went there to take some photos and I really like to visit there.

✓ Actually I have five. For instance, the Burj Khalifa, which is the tallest building in the world. I would really like to visit it because, as I said, it's very tall and many people go there to take photos.

Problems: numeral formatting and sentence fragments ('I have 5' unclear), article use ('the Burj Khalifa'), adjective form ('highest' vs 'tallest' for single building), redundant adjective ('really high and high building'), plural noun form and verb tense ('many peoples' should be 'many people'; 'went' wrong tense). Use 'tallest' for tallest building and 'visit it' as correct pronoun. Improve by learning correct articles for famous landmarks and pluralization of 'people'.

× Actually I do because tall building. Tall buildings are how can I say I like to live in a enormous cities and 12 in the buildings gives me this energy and it makes me more motivating for studying or work.

✓ Actually I do because I like tall buildings. I prefer living in large cities, and being in tall buildings gives me energy and motivates me to study or work.

Multiple issues: sentence fragments ('because tall building'), incorrect article 'a enormous' should be 'an enormous' and wrong plurality ('a enormous cities'). '12 in the buildings' is unclear and likely incorrect. Use 'gives me this energy' -> 'gives me energy' and 'it makes me more motivating' -> 'it motivates me'. Practice correct article use before vowels ('an'), adjective order, and using 'motivate' as a verb with appropriate subject.