Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接但有些重复和语法细节可以改进。可在第一句后用一两句具体细节丰富内容，并用连接词使表达更连贯，例如说明购物中心的特点、你何时去或最喜欢去的店铺。注意避免过多重复（例如两次提到shopping mall）并保持句子简短自然。

例: Yes, there is a tall building near my home — a large shopping mall. I often visit it with my family at weekends because it has a nice food court and several clothing stores I like.

提案: 回答有意思但存在时态和单复数错误，且细节不够具体。建议使用正确时态（过去式）并说明为什么“meaningful”，例如建筑的设计或你们的感受。此外可以用连接词（because, so, therefore）让理由更清晰。

例: Yes, I do. Last weekend I went to that shopping mall with my friends and we took photos of the building because we admired its unique façade and wanted to remember the trip.

提案: 回答有想法但语法、词序和不完整句子影响表达。需要修正形容词搭配（glass‑faced 或 glass façade），用正确的名词形式（interior, impressive）并把例子说完整。同时使用连接词（because, for example）使理由与例子衔接自然。

例: Yes, I'd like to visit a large office building downtown because it has a striking glass façade and I heard the interior is very impressive. For example, it features a rooftop garden and spacious atriums that are open to the public.

提案: 回答表达明确但有多处语法和用词错误（real, will don't be disturbed, which come）。建议使用正确的句子结构和连接词，简洁说明原因并补充具体细节（如楼层、景观或设施）。避免冗长重复。

例: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because higher floors are usually quieter, so I can sleep better. Also, living up high often offers nice views and less street noise from cars and pedestrians.

× Yes, there is a tall building near my home.

✓ Yes, there are tall buildings near my home.

原句使用了单数结构“there is a tall building”，但考官问的是“Are there tall buildings near your home?”（复数疑问）。回答应与问题保持数的一致性，使用复数“there are”。建议根据问题的数（单数或复数）选择相应的 there is/there are。

× It is a big shopping mall.

✓ They are big shopping malls.

上句改为复数回答后，后续描述也应保持一致。如果前句用复数（there are tall buildings），则接续描述应使用复数名词或指代复数的代词“they”。如果实际上只有一个商场，应将第一个回答改为单数以保持一致。请核实实际情况并保持单复数一致。

× Of course, last weekend I go to this shopping mall with my friends and we took photos of building because we think it's meaningful.

✓ Of course, last weekend I went to this shopping mall with my friends and we took photos of the building because we thought it was meaningful.

句中时间状语“last weekend”要求使用过去时态，动词“go”应改为过去式“went”。此外，“photos of building”缺少冠词，应为“photos of the building”。句中“we think it's meaningful”也应与过去时间一致，改为“we thought it was meaningful”。建议注意时间状语决定动词时态，并检查名词前的冠词使用。

× Yes, I would like to visit a large office building downtown because it's modern glass faced looks and I have heard the internal has a impressive. For example, the building has a rooftop garden and.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit a large office building downtown because it has a modern glass facade, and I have heard the interior is impressive. For example, the building has a rooftop garden.

原句中“modern glass faced looks”结构混乱，应使用名词短语“a modern glass facade”或形容词短语“it has a modern glass facade”。“the internal has a impressive”语法错误，内部应为“interior”，形容词前需用系动词：“the interior is impressive”。句子结尾有残缺“and.”应删去或补全。建议使用明确的名词和正确的形容词搭配，并完成句子结构。

× Yes, I really want to live in a tall building because I think it's real, really quiet, so I can have enough sleep and I will don't be disturbed by noise which come from cars and people.

✓ Yes, I really want to live in a tall building because I think it's really quiet, so I can get enough sleep and I won't be disturbed by noise that comes from cars and people.

原句中“it's real, really quiet”中“real”用法多余，应为“really quiet”。“I can have enough sleep”习惯用法是“get enough sleep”。“I will don't be disturbed”在将来时中否定形式错误，应为“I won't be disturbed”。最后“noise which come”主谓不一致，noise为单数不可数，谓语应为“comes”。建议注意副词用法、固定搭配（get sleep）、否定缩写和主谓一致。