Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答没有直接说出一种最喜欢的食物，且“you know”“some”“many things”等表达重复，使内容不够自然。建议先明确回答一种食物，再用 because 说明原因，并补充一个具体细节，例如味道、做法或食用场合。注意使用正确搭配，如“different kinds of vegetables”“I particularly enjoy pork”，并将答案控制在2—3句。

例: My favourite food is probably roast pork. I particularly enjoy it because it is tender, flavourful, and slightly crispy on the outside. I usually have it with rice and vegetables at the weekend.

提案: 主要问题是时态和动词形式错误，例如过去喜欢应使用“liked”，而不是“don't like”；“like eat”“ate”“taste”也需要统一为“liked eating”“having”“drinking”。回答应直接说明小时候喜欢的食物，并用一个原因或具体例子展开，避免“you know”和“or anything else”等口语填充和模糊表达。

例: When I was young, I really liked sweet foods, especially candy and ice cream. I also enjoyed drinking fruit juice because I had a sweet tooth. My parents did not let me eat too much of it, though.

提案: 回答虽然表达了“是”，但句子结构不完整，且“some food maybe seems to eat on summer”不符合英语习惯。建议直接说明季节会影响饮食，然后分别举出夏季和冬季的具体食物；使用“in summer/in winter”以及“because/whereas”等连接词，使逻辑更清楚。

例: Yes, I do, because my food choices change with the seasons. In summer, I tend to eat more fruit and cold salads because they are refreshing. In winter, I prefer hot soup and stews to keep me warm.

提案: 回答的观点清楚，也进行了童年与现在的对比，但“when I was a child maybe prefer”缺少主语和过去式，“full full of sugar”表达不自然。建议使用“used to prefer eating”描述过去习惯，并具体说明现在喜欢什么，而不仅仅是说不喜欢零食；可以用“whereas/because”连接对比和原因。

例: Yes, my preferences have changed quite a lot. I used to love sugary snacks, such as chocolate and biscuits, whereas now I prefer healthier food like grilled chicken and fresh vegetables. I have made this change because I want to maintain a balanced diet.

× When I was young actually I don't like eat some food like meat or anything else I just like you know, ate some candy and ice creams or taste some juice.

✓ When I was young, I didn't like eating foods such as meat or anything else. I just liked eating candy and ice cream or drinking some juice.

“When I was young”表示过去的时间，因此应使用一般过去时。应将“don't like”改为“didn't like”，将“like”改为“liked”，将“taste”改为“drinking”以保持时态和结构一致。

× When I was young actually I don't like eat some food like meat or anything else I just like you know, ate some candy and ice creams or taste some juice.

✓ When I was young, I didn't like eating foods such as meat or anything else. I just liked eating candy and ice cream or drinking some juice.

动词“like”后面通常接动名词（-ing形式）来表示喜欢做某事，所以“like eat”应改为“like eating”，“like ate”应改为“liked eating”。饮用果汁应使用“drinking some juice”，而不是“taste some juice”。

× When I was young actually I don't like eat some food like meat or anything else I just like you know, ate some candy and ice creams or taste some juice.

✓ When I was young, I didn't like eating foods such as meat or anything else. I just liked eating candy and ice cream or drinking some juice.

原句包含多个独立分句，却没有使用句号或合适的连接词连接，造成句子过长、结构混乱。可以拆成两个完整句子，并在“such as”和“or”后使用平行结构。

× When I was young actually I don't like eat some food like meat or anything else I just like you know, ate some candy and ice creams or taste some juice.

✓ When I was young, I didn't like eating foods such as meat or anything else. I just liked eating candy and ice cream or drinking some juice.

“food”在这里表示多种食物，应使用复数“foods”。“ice cream”通常是不可数名词，表示这种食物时不需要加复数词尾，因此应改为“ice cream”。

× Yes, of course. Because many foods, you know, it depends on the seasons. You know, some food maybe seems to eat on summer and maybe others on winter. So yeah, I do

✓ Yes, of course. Many foods depend on the season. Some foods may be eaten in summer, and others may be eaten in winter. So, yes, I do.

“Because many foods ...”本身不是完整句子，而且后面的“it depends”与“many foods”搭配不合理。应去掉句首的“Because”，并改成完整、清晰的句子。

× Yes, of course. Because many foods, you know, it depends on the seasons. You know, some food maybe seems to eat on summer and maybe others on winter. So yeah, I do

✓ Yes, of course. Many foods depend on the season. Some foods may be eaten in summer, and others may be eaten in winter. So, yes, I do.

“some”后面通常接可数名词复数，所以“some food”在表示多种食物时应改为“some foods”。“others”已经表示复数，前后应保持一致。

× Yes, of course. Because many foods, you know, it depends on the seasons. You know, some food maybe seems to eat on summer and maybe others on winter. So yeah, I do

✓ Yes, of course. Many foods depend on the season. Some foods may be eaten in summer, and others may be eaten in winter. So, yes, I do.

表示“在夏天/冬天”时，季节前应使用介词“in”，所以“on summer”和“on winter”应分别改为“in summer”和“in winter”。

× Yes, of course. Because many foods, you know, it depends on the seasons. You know, some food maybe seems to eat on summer and maybe others on winter. So yeah, I do

✓ Yes, of course. Many foods depend on the season. Some foods may be eaten in summer, and others may be eaten in winter. So, yes, I do.

食物是“被吃”的对象，因此需要使用被动语态“may be eaten”，而不能说“food may seem to eat”。被动语态结构为“主语 + may be + 过去分词”。

× Actually yes, because when I was a child maybe prefer to eat something for example full full of sugar and like snacks, but now I don't like them because it's not good for my health.

✓ Actually, yes. When I was a child, I preferred to eat foods that were full of sugar, such as snacks, but now I don't like them because they aren't good for my health.

“When I was a child”表示过去，因此“prefer”应使用过去式“preferred”。同时，原句缺少主语“I”，应补充为“I preferred”。

× Actually yes, because when I was a child maybe prefer to eat something for example full full of sugar and like snacks, but now I don't like them because it's not good for my health.

✓ Actually, yes. When I was a child, I preferred to eat foods that were full of sugar, such as snacks, but now I don't like them because they aren't good for my health.

“when I was a child maybe prefer”缺少主语和正确的谓语形式，句子结构不完整。“full full of sugar”结构也不正确，应改为“foods that were full of sugar”。把答案拆成两个句子后，表达会更清楚。

× Actually yes, because when I was a child maybe prefer to eat something for example full full of sugar and like snacks, but now I don't like them because it's not good for my health.

✓ Actually, yes. When I was a child, I preferred to eat foods that were full of sugar, such as snacks, but now I don't like them because they aren't good for my health.

“them”指代复数的“foods/snacks”，因此后面的代词也应保持复数形式。应将“it's not good”改为“they aren't good”，不能使用单数代词“it”。