Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Keep your answer focused and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence stating your favourite food, then give one or two specific, coherent reasons using simple linking words (because, and, so). Avoid unclear or incorrect words and aim for correct grammar and pronunciation. For example, mention who cooks it and what makes it special (taste, texture, family tradition).

例: My favourite food is fried chicken because my grandmother makes it at home. Her recipe is simple but very tasty, with crispy skin and juicy meat, and eating it reminds me of family gatherings.

提案: Answer the question directly: name a type of food you liked as a child, then give a short reason or memory. Use one clear topic sentence and one supporting detail, connected by a linking word (because/when). Avoid asking the examiner to explain the question.

例: When I was young I loved bananas and rice because they were easy to eat and my mother gave them to me every day. I remember eating them in the kitchen while watching cartoons.

提案: Provide a clear yes/no topic sentence and then give specific examples of seasonal foods and why you eat them (weather, festivals, fresh produce). Use simple linking words (for example, in summer/at Christmas) and correct vocabulary. Avoid vague or unrelated words.

例: Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in summer I eat more salads and fruits like watermelon, while in winter I prefer hot soups and stews to stay warm.

提案: Answer directly: say whether your favourite food has changed, then give a specific example of what you used to like and what you like now, with a reason. Keep sentences short and grammatically correct, and use linking words (but, so, however). Avoid unclear fragments and incomplete sentences.

例: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I liked a simple mix of banana and rice, but now I prefer fried chicken because I enjoy the flavour and family meals more.

× My favorite food is fried chicken because it's cooked with my gay matto.

✓ My favorite food is fried chicken because it's cooked with my grandma's recipe.

The original sentence uses incorrect words 'gay matto' which seem to be wrong nouns/adjectives. This is an issue of word choice/incorrect adjective/noun use. Replace with a clear noun phrase 'grandma's recipe' to convey meaning. Ensure possession using 'grandma's'.

× In my favorite house I prefer cooking is my grandmato beg is so easy and delicious I did it like eat

✓ In my favorite house, I prefer cooking my grandma's recipe because it is so easy and delicious; I made it often and enjoyed eating it.

Original is a run-on with unclear phrases and wrong word forms ('grandmato beg'). This is a sentence structure problem. Break into clear clauses, fix possessive 'grandma's', use proper verb forms 'prefer cooking', 'it is', and past 'made' or present perfect as context requires. Use punctuation to separate ideas.

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✓ When I was young, my first memorable food experience abroad was ... (then answer the question).

The original is not an answer and is a fragment plus a question; this is a sentence structure error. Provide a complete sentence that answers the prompt, using past tense 'was' for a past experience. The student should state the food and describe it.

× Yes, I eat different for the years because sometime I feel is about thirty.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year because sometimes I feel like having something seasonal.

Original misuses 'different' without a noun and has tense/word choice issues. This is an incorrect quantifier/noun omission: add plural 'foods' and correct time expression 'at different times of the year'. Replace 'sometime I feel is about thirty' with 'sometimes I feel like having something seasonal' for clarity.

× I often eat races table and food.

✓ I often eat rice, vegetables, and other foods at the table.

'Races table' is incorrect word choice and lacks proper nouns. This is an adjective/noun use error. Replace with likely intended words 'rice' and 'table' usage: 'eat at the table'. List food items clearly.

× Sometimes I eat fashion.

✓ Sometimes I try new food trends.

'Eat fashion' is incorrect collocation. This is an adjective/adverb/noun choice error. Use 'try new food trends' or 'eat fashionable dishes' to express the intended meaning.

× My child I used a brows bonana and rice mix mix and water bottle no smoothie because I don't have my

✓ When I was a child, I used to mix brown banana and rice with water because I didn't have a blender to make a smoothie.

Original mixes tenses and uses wrong words 'brows bonana' and missing ending. This includes present/past tense misuse: for childhood habits use 'used to' and past 'didn't have'. Also correct vocabulary: 'brown banana' or 'ripe banana', 'blender'. Ensure complete sentence with object 'blender' or 'mixer'.