Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve clarity, grammar and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the dish, then give 1–2 specific supporting details (ingredients, taste, when you eat it). Use correct vocabulary (biriyani) and fix grammar (e.g. “my favorite dish is biryani, a spicy Bangladeshi rice and chicken dish”). Keep to 2–4 sentences and avoid invented words like “makeout”.

例: My favourite food is Bengali biryani. It is a spicy rice dish made with fragrant basmati rice, marinated chicken and warm spices like cardamom and cinnamon. I love it because of the rich aroma and the contrast of tender meat and fluffy rice.

提案: Answer directly with a clear tense and give specific examples from childhood. Use one topic sentence (what you liked), then one supporting detail (a particular dish, who cooked it, why). Avoid vague claims like “very healthy” unless you explain. Keep sentences short and grammatically correct.

例: When I was young, I loved spicy foods such as chilli fish and masala potatoes. My grandmother used to cook them for me, and I enjoyed the strong flavours and aromas. I liked them because they made simple meals exciting.

提案: Make a direct, coherent response about seasonal or regional food differences. First state whether you change your diet by season. Then give specific examples (fruits, festivals, regional specialties) and use linking words (for example, in summer, during festivals). Correct place names and dish names (Chittagong).

例: Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in summer I eat more fresh fruits like mangoes and in winter I enjoy hot soups and mutton curry. Also, when I visit Chittagong I try local seafood dishes such as spicy fish curry.

提案: Give a clear yes/no answer and support it with reasons and brief details. If it hasn't changed, say why (habit, family tradition, strong preference). If it changed, explain when and what caused the change. Use correct grammar and 2–3 concise sentences.

例: No, my favourite food has not changed since childhood. I still prefer spicy dishes because I grew up eating them and they remind me of family meals. I often choose biryani or spicy fish when I want comfort food.

× Actually, my favorite food is Bangladeshi food. Its name is Birdiani.

✓ Actually, my favorite food is Bangladeshi biryani.

The student used 'Birdiani' (spelling error) and treated 'Bangladeshi food' and the dish name as separate phrases. Use the correct dish name 'biryani' and combine for clarity: 'Bangladeshi biryani.' Also avoid redundant nouns ('food' after the dish name) to make the sentence natural.

× It's very spicy and very popular in our county.

✓ It is very spicy and very popular in our country.

The student wrote 'county' instead of 'country' (wrong word choice). Also use 'it' to refer to the dish. Correcting the noun to 'country' makes the meaning clear.

× It's a makeout chicken and

✓ It is made with chicken,

The phrase 'makeout chicken' is ungrammatical and likely a mispronunciation of 'made with chicken.' Use passive construction 'made with chicken' to describe ingredients. The trailing 'and' suggests the sentence was incomplete; end or complete the sentence.

× I like to spicy food because it's my favorite it's very healthy for our body at least very popular in the world.

✓ I liked spicy food when I was young because it was my favorite; it is very popular in the world and can be healthy for our bodies.

The question asks about the past (when you were young), so use past tense 'liked.' The original mixes present and past incorrectly. Also 'like to spicy food' is ungrammatical; use 'like spicy food.' 'Our body' should be plural 'our bodies.' Use punctuation to separate ideas for clarity.

× There's a life.

✓ There was a time.

'There's a life' is not meaningful in context. Likely the student meant 'there was a time' to refer to the past. Use 'there was' to indicate past existence.

× Yes, sure, different time island eat different food because I like to go to or county she destination is division is Chitau.

✓ Yes, of course. At different times of the year people eat different foods. I like to visit my district; my division is Chittagong.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains many errors: 'different time island' is unclear; replace with 'at different times of the year.' 'I like to go to or county she destination' is meaningless; rephrase to 'I like to visit my district.' Spelling 'Chitau' likely refers to 'Chittagong' (a division). Use complete sentences.

× Chitaganga food is a bird.

✓ Chittagong food includes many rice and meat dishes like biryani.

The original 'is a bird' is incorrect—probably a mispronunciation of 'biryani' or confusion. Clarify by describing typical dishes. Also correct the place name 'Chittagong.'

× Actually no childhood the time I eat spicy food and TK that's a like to spicy food.

✓ Actually, when I was a child I ate spicy food and I liked it a lot.

The question asks about change since childhood, so use past tense 'was' and 'ate' and 'liked.' The original mixes tenses and has fragments ('TK'). Replace with clear past-tense phrasing.

× I have no chance any food.

✓ I have not changed my choice of food.

'I have no chance any food' is ungrammatical and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'I have not changed my food preferences.' Use present perfect 'have not changed' to indicate the situation continues from past to present.