Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct and natural: start with a clear topic sentence naming the food, then add one or two specific details (why you like it, when you eat it). Keep it concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words if you add a reason.

例: My favourite food is spicy curry. I enjoy it because the flavours are bold and it warms me up on cold evenings.

提案: Begin with a clear past-tense statement about childhood preferences, then give specific examples and a brief reason or contrast with now. Use linking words (for example, and, also, whereas) and correct names/spelling for clarity.

例: When I was young, I liked South Indian snacks such as dosa and paniyaram, and also noodles. For example, I often had dosa for breakfast because it was quick and tasty.

提案: Give a direct yes/no with a brief explanation and one or two specific examples of seasonal foods. Use linking words like "for example" or "in summer/ winter" to make the answer coherent.

例: Yes, I do. In summer I prefer lighter meals like salads and fruit, while in winter I eat more soups and stews to keep warm.

提案: Answer clearly in past-to-present terms: say whether it changed, then explain how and why with a specific example. Keep sentences grammatical and use linking words such as "because" or "since".

例: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I loved noodles, but now I prefer spicy curries because I developed a taste for stronger flavours over time.

× My favorite food is I like a spicy food.

✓ My favorite food is spicy food. OR I like spicy food.

The original sentence mixes two different sentence structures causing redundancy and incorrect word order. Either state the favorite food with 'My favorite food is ...' or express preference with 'I like ...'. Also, 'a spicy food' is incorrect because 'spicy food' is an uncountable/general noun phrase and does not need the article 'a'. Use 'spicy food' without the article. Suggestion: choose one structure and remove the extra clause: 'My favorite food is spicy food.' or 'I like spicy food.'

× I like dosa, pani putty, bale puddy, noodles, these type food, my favourite food.

✓ I like dosa, pani puri, bhel puri and noodles; these types of food are my favourites.

Multiple issues: some food names were misspelled (pani puri, bhel puri), and the phrase 'these type food' is grammatically wrong. 'Type' should be plural 'types' when referring to more than one kind, and 'food' needs 'of' in the phrase 'types of food'. Also 'my favourite food' should agree in number with 'these types', so use plural 'favourites' or rephrase as 'my favourite foods'. Ensure consistent present tense 'I like'.

× Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year.

This sentence is grammatically correct: present simple tense appropriately describes habitual actions, verb and subject agree, and the phrase 'at different times of the year' is correct. No change needed.

× Yes my favorite food changed since I when I joined.

✓ Yes, my favourite food has changed since I joined. OR Yes, my favourite food changed when I joined.

The original sentence inserts an extra word 'I' and mixes tense. With 'since' the present perfect is required ('has changed since I joined') because 'since' connects a past point to the present. If using simple past, remove 'since' and say 'changed when I joined.' Also include necessary commas and correct word order. Use one of the corrected forms depending on intended meaning.