Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng và chính xác từ vựng. Tránh phát âm sai từ (ví dụ 'Chicken Friend' nên là 'fried chicken'), loại bỏ tiếng lấp đầy như 'Uh', và mở rộng câu thêm 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ vì vị ngon, vì kỷ niệm). Hãy giữ tối đa 3-4 câu, sử dụng liên từ đơn giản để nối ý.

例: My favourite food is fried chicken because I love the crispy skin and juicy meat. I usually eat it with a fresh salad or rice, which makes the meal balanced. It also reminds me of weekend family dinners, so it tastes special to me.

提案: Cần dùng thì quá khứ phù hợp ('liked' thay vì 'like') và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về lý do hoặc ví dụ về món ăn. Tránh câu quá ngắn; thêm 1 câu giải thích hoặc ví dụ sẽ làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'for example' để nối ý.

例: When I was young, I liked fast food and seafood because it was convenient and tasty. For example, I often ate hamburgers with fries and sometimes grilled shrimp at family gatherings.

提案: Câu trả lời không trả lời đúng câu hỏi và ngữ pháp sai khá nhiều. Trả lời cần rõ ràng về việc có hay không thay đổi theo mùa, dùng thì hiện tại đơn hoặc hiện tại hoàn thành, và nêu ví dụ cụ thể cho mùa lạnh/ấm hoặc dịp lễ. Giữ cấu trúc: topic sentence + 1-2 supporting details, sử dụng liên từ như 'in summer', 'during winter' hoặc 'for example'.

例: Yes, I do. In summer I prefer light foods like salads and cold fruits, while in winter I enjoy hot soups and stews. For example, during the rainy season I often eat chicken soup to feel warm.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ nghĩa và ngữ pháp sai. Trả lời nên bắt đầu trực tiếp: 'No, it hasn't changed' hoặc 'Yes, it has changed' rồi giải thích lý do cụ thể. Dùng thì hiện tại hoàn thành để nói về thay đổi kể từ quá khứ. Thêm 1 câu giải thích ngắn gọn để làm rõ quan điểm.

例: No, my favourite food hasn't changed since I was a child; I still love fried chicken. However, I now prefer healthier sides like salads instead of fries.

× Uh, my favorite food is Chicken Friend because it's very yummy.

✓ Uh, my favorite food is chicken fried because it's very yummy.

The student wrote 'Chicken Friend' which is a misspelling and incorrect adjective order/casing. Use lowercase for common nouns and correct word 'fried' rather than 'friend'. Suggestion: learn common food collocations and check spelling. Use 'chicken fried' or more natural 'fried chicken'. Note: In English, 'fried chicken' is the typical word order (adjective before noun: 'fried' modifies 'chicken').

× When I was young, I like fast food and seafood.

✓ When I was young, I liked fast food and seafood.

The clause begins with 'When I was young', a past time marker, so the verb should be in the past tense. 'Like' is present tense; change to 'liked'. Suggestion: match verb tense to time expressions indicating past (e.g., 'when I was...').

× Is my childhood I began on be keen on candy and also I love chicken and fridge when I grow up I like fast food and.

✓ In my childhood, I was keen on candy and I loved chicken and fries; when I grew up, I liked fast food.

The original sentence has multiple structural errors: wrong initial word 'Is', incorrect verb forms ('began on be keen'), wrong noun 'fridge' instead of 'fries', and inconsistent tenses. Corrected version reorganizes clauses, uses past tense for past time ('was keen', 'loved', 'grew up', 'liked'), and replaces 'fridge' with 'fries'. Suggestion: break into clear clauses, use appropriate past tense after 'in my childhood' and 'when I grew up', and check vocabulary (fries vs fridge).

× My favorite foods no change size I where I was a child.

✓ My favorite foods haven't changed since I was a child.

The original has missing auxiliary verb and wrong words: 'no change size I where I was a child' is ungrammatical. Use present perfect 'haven't changed' to describe a change from past to present, and 'since I was a child' as the correct time phrase. Suggestion: use present perfect for actions that started in the past and continue to the present, include appropriate auxiliaries (have/has).