Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap kısa, dilbilgisi hatalı ve doğal değil. Konu cümlesinde tek bir kelimeyle yetinmek yerine belirli bir yemek türü veya örnekler verin. Ayrıca çoğul-tekil uyumuna dikkat edin ve daha akıcı bir ifade için bağlaç veya neden belirtin. Örneğin ‘I like meat’ yerine hangi et türlerini sevdiğinizi veya neden sevdiğinizi söyleyebilirsiniz.

例: My favourite food is meat, especially grilled beef and chicken, because I enjoy the smoky flavour and hearty texture.

提案: Cümlelerinizde zaman uyumu ve kelime seçimi sorunlu; gereksiz tekrarlar ve belirsiz ifadeler var. Geçmiş zaman kullanırken düzenli geçmiş (liked) kullanın, tekil/çoğul uyumuna dikkat edin ve daha spesifik örnek verin. Ayrıca gereksiz bağlaç ‘and’ tekrarlarını azaltın.

例: When I was a child, I liked fried potatoes a lot, especially homemade fries that my mother used to make on weekends.

提案: İfade dilbilgisi ve kelime dizimi açısından hatalı; duygu veya neden daha açık yazılmalı. 'I'm bored of eating the same food' gibi doğru ifadeyi kullanın ve mevsimlere göre hangi yiyeceklerin değiştiğini belirtin. Bağlaçlarla mantıklı bir sebep-sonuç ilişkisi kurun.

例: Yes, my diet changes with the seasons; for example, I eat more salads and cold dishes in summer and prefer soups and stews in winter because I get bored of the same meals.

提案: Tekrar eden kelimeler ve dilbilgisi hataları var. 'Definitely' iki kez kullanılmamalı; geçmişten şimdiye değişimi açıkça belirtin ve örneklerle destekleyin. Cümle yapısını sadeleştirip uygun zaman kullanın.

例: Yes, it has changed several times; for instance, I loved fried potatoes as a child, but now I prefer grilled meat and vegetables because my tastes have matured.

× My favorite food meats.

✓ My favorite food is meat.

The student used the plural noun 'meats' incorrectly. 'Food' is uncountable here and should be paired with the uncountable noun 'meat' or use 'meats' only when referring to different types of meat. Also the sentence lacked a verb. Correct structure: 'My favorite food is meat.' Suggestion: use 'meat' (uncountable) and include the verb 'is'.

× And when I was a child, I like a potato, a fried potato.

✓ When I was a child, I liked potatoes, fried potatoes.

The question refers to the past, so the verb should be in past tense: 'liked' not 'like'. Also 'a potato, a fried potato' is unnatural; use plural 'potatoes' or 'fried potatoes' to indicate a general preference. Suggestion: use past tense verb 'liked' and plural nouns for general statements in the past.

× And when I young, I like a mid and the change.

✓ When I was young, I liked milk and change?

This sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. It misses the auxiliary 'was' after 'I' for past state ('I was young') and uses present tense 'like' instead of past 'liked'. The nouns 'a mid and the change' seem incorrect or mistranscribed; likely intended words are missing. Suggestion: clarify the intended items; use 'When I was young, I liked ...' with correct nouns and past tense.

× Yes, it's changed a lot because I'm boring the same food eating.

✓ Yes, it has changed a lot because I get bored eating the same food.

Multiple issues: 'it's changed' is acceptable but better as present perfect 'it has changed' contracted. 'I'm boring' is wrong; 'bored' (adjective) should be used to express feeling. Also word order 'the same food eating' is incorrect; correct order: 'eating the same food'. Suggestion: use 'I get bored eating the same food' or 'I am bored of eating the same food'.

× Yes, definitely it several times because my mind definitely change and my tastes change.

✓ Yes, it has changed several times because my mind and my tastes have definitely changed.

The time frame refers to changes up to now, so present perfect 'has changed' should be used rather than simple present. 'It several times' lacks a verb. 'My mind definitely change and my tastes change' uses incorrect present instead of present perfect 'have changed' and subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: use present perfect for past actions with present relevance: 'has/have changed'.