Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clear, grammatical and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence naming the dish, then give one or two specific details (why you like it and a short example). Use correct word order and simple adjectives. Keep it under five sentences and avoid repetition.

例: My favourite food is the spicy homemade curry my mother makes. I like it because she uses fresh spices and tomatoes, which give it a rich flavour. It also reminds me of family dinners and makes me feel comforted.

提案: Use a clear past-tense topic sentence and give one or two specific examples of snacks. Avoid redundancy and correct grammar (past simple or used to). Use linking words if you add reasons.

例: When I was young, I used to eat a lot of street snacks like samosas and fried sweets. I enjoyed them because they were crispy and sweet, and I often had them at festivals or family outings.

提案: Answer directly about seasonal variation first, then give a specific example. Use clear linking words (for example, in winter, during festivals). Correct phrasing for experiences ("when I visited relatives in Gujarat, I tried..."). Limit to 2–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, when I visited my relatives in Gujarat, I tried dhokla, a light, steamed snack that is tangy and fluffy. I usually prefer warm, hearty foods in winter and lighter dishes like salads in summer.

提案: Give a clear comparison between past and present using linking words ("formerly/nowadays/however"). State what you used to eat, what you eat now, and a brief reason for the change. Use correct verb forms and avoid repetition.

例: Yes, my eating habits have changed. Previously I often ate snack foods that my parents gave me, but nowadays I prefer quick, healthy options like oats and cereal for breakfast because I am busier and want to eat more nourishing meals.

× My favorite food is my homemade food spicy made my my mother.

✓ My favorite food is the spicy homemade food my mother makes.

The sentence has incorrect word order and form. 'Homemade' should modify 'food' before it; 'spicy' also modifies 'homemade food'. Use the definite article 'the' for a specific food and change 'made my my mother' to 'my mother makes' to use correct verb form and word order. Suggestion: put modifiers before the noun and use present simple for habitual actions.

× It is a very delicious and mouth watching food.

✓ It is a very delicious and mouth-watering dish.

'Mouth watching' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'mouth-watering'. Also 'food' is better replaced with 'dish' here. Use parallel adjective structure: 'very delicious and mouth-watering'. Suggestion: use established adjective collocations and check hyphenation for compound adjectives.

× When I was child I mostly enjoy to eating the snacks and it's very delicious to eat and it is a great food which I eat oftenly in my childhood and whenever I event and I mostly try to eat snacks.

✓ When I was a child I mostly enjoyed eating snacks; they were very delicious, and I often ate them during my childhood and at events.

Multiple problems: missing article 'a' before 'child' (Article errors but fixed here), wrong tense 'enjoy' should be past 'enjoyed' (Past tense issue), incorrect verb form 'to eating' should be 'eating' (Verb + -ing form), 'oftenly' is not a word—use 'often' (Incorrect use of adverbs), and sentence is run-on and repetitive. I combined ideas, used past tense for past habits, corrected verb forms, and removed redundancy. Suggestion: use simple past for past habits, use 'enjoyed eating', and avoid adverb errors like 'oftenly'.

× Yes, I try a number of different foods in my core in my life and the best food I travelled is my relative where they live in Gujarat and the famous food of Gujarat I tried is a Dhokla.

✓ Yes, I have tried a number of different foods in my life, and the best food I encountered was at my relative's home in Gujarat; the famous Gujarati food I tried was dhokla.

Tense and phrasing issues: 'try a number of different foods in my core in my life' is unclear—use present perfect 'have tried' for life experiences. 'The best food I travelled is my relative' is ungrammatical; use 'the best food I encountered was at my relative's home'. Possessive form 'relative's' is needed (Incorrect use of pronouns/possessive). Reorder to clarify. Suggestion: use present perfect for life experiences and correct possessive nouns.

× It is a very delicious and flavoury and it can brighten the mood of person.

✓ It is very delicious and flavorful, and it can brighten a person's mood.

'Flavoury' is nonstandard; use 'flavorful' or 'flavoursome'. 'The mood of person' needs an article and possessive form—use 'a person's mood'. Also avoid repeating 'and' unnecessarily. Suggestion: choose standard adjective forms and use 'a person's' for general statements.

× Just changes are very important in life and my food are changing my past and nowadays in the earlier I mostly eat the snacks and other thing which my parents give me to eat at a home or food but now they are mostly mostly tend to eat a quicker food like oats and cereals.

✓ Change is important in life. My eating habits have changed: in the past I mostly ate snacks and other foods my parents gave me at home, but now I tend to eat quicker foods like oats and cereals.

Many issues: 'Just changes are very important' is awkward—use 'Change is important'. Subject-verb agreement 'my food are changing' is wrong (Singular and plural / Subject-verb agreement); use 'eating habits have changed' (Present perfect for change). 'I mostly eat the snacks' should be past 'ate' for past habits (Past tense issue). 'Other thing' should be 'other foods' (Incorrect use of nouns/adjectives). 'Mostly mostly tend' is redundant. 'Quicker food' should be 'quick foods' or 'quick meals'. I rewrote for clarity, corrected tense and agreement. Suggestion: use present perfect to describe changes from past to present, ensure subject-verb agreement, and avoid redundancy.