Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ понятен, но есть небольшие ошибки стиля и повторения. Улучшите связность и разнообразие лексики, избегайте избыточных вводных слов (например, "for example" дважды по смыслу). Также можно добавить конкретный описательный элемент (например, приправы или способ приготовления) для большей конкретики.

例: My favourite food is grilled chicken because it is flavorful and relatively healthy. I usually marinate it in garlic and herbs, then grill it until the skin is crispy. I often serve it with rice or a fresh salad, and I like cooking it at home on Sundays to share with my family.

提案: Грамматика времени используется неправильно (смешение настоящего и прошедшего). Фразы повторяются ("really like" двежды). Сделайте ответ короче и точнее, корректно употребляйте прошедшее время и добавьте конкретную деталь о вкусе или ощущениях.

例: When I was young, I loved homemade soups and fresh bread. My mother often made chicken soup with bread, which was warm and comforting after school. I remember the soup had a rich, savory flavour that always made me feel happy.

提案: Ответ небрежен: есть лишние вводные слова и ошибки синтаксиса (лишние слова "for example, for instance", артикли и порядок слов). Дайте более связный ответ с использованием связующих слов и корректной грамматикой. Добавьте конкретные примеры блюд для сезона.

例: Yes, I do. In summer I tend to eat more fresh vegetables and fruits, such as salads and berries. In winter I prefer warm soups and hearty dishes like stew or roasted vegetables to stay warm.

提案: Ответ содержит несколько серьёзных ошибки: структура предложения неясна, неправильное местоимение ("his") и лексические ошибки ("rich topics"). Переформулируйте предложение ясно, используйте корректное местоимение и объясните, почему именно эта еда остаётся любимой, с конкретными причинами.

例: No, my favourite food hasn't changed since childhood — it's pizza. I have always loved its rich toppings and crispy crust, and I still enjoy trying different toppings and styles of pizza.

× Well, when I was young, I really like homemade soups and bread.

✓ Well, when I was young, I really liked homemade soups and bread.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was young'), so the verb should be in the past tense ('liked') rather than the present ('like'). Use past tense to match the time reference. Suggestion: Change verbs to past tense for actions or states that occurred in the past.

× For example, I often had chicken soup with bread after school and I really like it.

✓ For example, I often had chicken soup with bread after school and I really liked it.

The clause begins with a past-time reference ('I often had'), so the following clause should also use past tense for consistency ('I really liked it'). Mixing past and present tenses causes a tense inconsistency. Suggestion: Keep verbs in the same past timeframe when describing past habits or experiences.

× I in the summer I eat fresh vegetables, fruits and in the winter I eat a warm soups and dishes.

✓ In the summer I eat fresh vegetables and fruits, and in the winter I eat warm soups and dishes.

Redundant or misplaced preposition and extra pronoun 'I' cause awkward structure; 'in the summer' should start the clause. Also remove the article 'a' before the plural 'warm soups'. Suggestion: Place time prepositional phrases at the start or correct position and ensure articles agree with countable nouns.

× and in the winter I eat a warm soups and dishes.

✓ and in the winter I eat warm soups and dishes.

The indefinite article 'a' should not be used before a plural noun ('soups'). Use no article for plural general nouns. Suggestion: Use 'a' with singular countable nouns only; omit it before plural nouns when speaking generally.

× To be honest, I don't think like that my favorite food is pizza since my childhood because I really like his rich topics and crispy flavor.

✓ To be honest, I don't think that my favorite food has been pizza since my childhood because I really like its rich toppings and crispy flavor.

Several issues: 'don't think like that' is awkward—use 'don't think that' or 'don't believe'; when describing a state starting in the past and continuing to now, use present perfect ('has been') not simple present 'is' with 'since'. 'His' is incorrect possessive for food; use 'its'. 'Topics' is a typo for 'toppings'. Suggestion: Use present perfect with 'since' to show continuation from past to present, use correct possessive 'its' for objects, and correct spelling 'toppings'.